Very interesting, nice work

I liked Definity, though I have never heard it before, but I lost it on the high point in my eyes, probab;ly a result of the low point in my mind, it has a nice feel though.

Christain, Christain, Christian. Jesu have mercy on your soul, you take one concept and apply it while forgetting all the rest. For instance, Judge lest not ye be judged, love thy neighbor, and you ignore the majority of christian history. How many crusades have there been? George's point of view(or the one he has tryed to express) is that he is helping his nieghbor(Iraq) by being its doctor and cutting out the diseased tissue. Look you have faith in god right? Well I have to call you one of little faith. If god, has a plan for everything, than he has a reason to have W. leading our nation. Cap him all you want but don't dog his faith cause you don't believe that for whatever reason he should be there. P.S. Christ is supposedly perfect, Men are not. Remember that.

Left Wing all the way, even if I some what agree with what you have to say, more opinion that poem. Try maybe you should try ryhming.

Decent but as I'm sure you've been told runs long

Better than what I've read so far but still not quite "free thinking enough"

Yig! I say, Sure you got a message but your just saying it with no style, no flare, no room for any intereptation. Try giving a little effort at being poetic.

Such Talent such skill, brings a tear to my eye. Since I did get a good Laugh (We're talking 3 whole minutes here) -10-.

Haha, sorry... I try and see the best in poems but this one didn't seem to make me feel anything at all. I'll say this for you, you managed you be a little chiche, without diving off the deep end but your words fail to make any emotion conection to me. Not Bad, Not Good. Nothing really outstanding other than it doesn't strike me as either good writing or bad. Since I feel neutral to this poem -5-.

Hmmm... D.A.'s Vote here with a so much as a real word surprises me. Personally I thought this was good but not worthy of 10. I'd say more like an 8. Its good but just a little cliche, don't ask me how it manages not to be.

1mc. This is not your captain speaking. The baby is drowning. I repeat. The baby is bowling. That is all.

10

I would love to hear it set to music!

Welcome to Poemeranker. I am -=Dark_Angel=-, the naughty one. You will probably see me again at some point, mocking your tepid, clichéd poemes. Have a good time!

What were you trying to say with this piece?

-=Haiku=- (Haiku) by -=Dark_Angel=- Beauty, wonderment, Feeling, emotion, truth, love, Magical forest.

I cant say anything more than this...i completly agree and i do wish that people would give actual helpful comments instead of degrading people on their thoughts