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some deleted user on Only A Heartbeat Away by Deborah Carter 25 May 2003, 2:38 PM
Hmmm..... interesting (8)
some deleted user on A Woman's Heart by brokenheart 25 May 2003, 2:25 PM
A woman's heart is special, a woman has such class You will be very happy if she lets you fuck her ass
some deleted user on My girl by simone_girard 25 May 2003, 1:43 PM
wow, this sucks
bondjedi on Theology by dougsoderstrom 25 May 2003, 1:37 PM
this is a great poem - not! I suspect you are writing bad poems on purpose to receive recognition, of a sort, on the bottom 15. you get a ten.
blurryphotograph on Make a wish by thepinkbunnyofdoom 25 May 2003, 11:22 AM
"pour me a glass of apathy" ha..great opening line.. ..7?
Deborah Carter replying on The Best This Dream Can Offer by Deborah Carter 25 May 2003, 7:18 AM
Bill...thank you for your warm welcome...nice to be here. In answer to your question. I definately am not a singer nor songwriter per say. Whenever I write, I hear music...it is with me continuously. Every poem I've written is a song in my head.I have no formal education in music so I can only write the words.
Deborah Carter replying on The Best This Dream Can Offer by Deborah Carter 25 May 2003, 7:11 AM
cindy...this is actually the un-edited version(the original poem I wrote).Bill made a revision that I'm playing around with and when allowed to post again(you are only allowed to post three times in a week. am I correct?)I will post it again...guess I could have posted it along with this one huh...on the same page.
Blue Magpie on Activating your Infinity by horus8 25 May 2003, 3:57 AM
Quite an interesting story, reading the comments is almost as much fun.
Blue Magpie replying on Para Metres by Blue Magpie 25 May 2003, 3:49 AM
What is concrete
some deleted user on Eyes by Jake 25 May 2003, 1:46 AM
I like this Jake. I think you could improve upon the poem with a few less commas. Do you read them aloud to see if it flows well? And it should be 'hoping.' The poem has a lot of depth and I think just needs a little tweeking. Peace,
crwncka1 replying on the black light by crwncka1 24 May 2003, 9:40 PM
agreed...
crwncka1 replying on the inner flame by crwncka1 24 May 2003, 9:33 PM
your interest in my work i find flattering.... i got a few ill pull outta my ass0r just for you... <evil grin>
lil cindy lu who on The Best This Dream Can Offer by Deborah Carter 24 May 2003, 9:18 PM
I noticed this one is not arranged by Bill Murray...do you have another version or has this one not been edited as yet
INTRANSIT replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 24 May 2003, 9:02 PM
'tis. I'm all of 25% Irish. woo hoo.
INTRANSIT replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 24 May 2003, 9:00 PM
I'm crashin'. Gotta move some cheap ass Kia product tomorrow. Maybe by that time I'll have written something worth ranking. Me? HA!
Bill Z Bub replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 24 May 2003, 8:59 PM
Well, it's a bit obscure compared to Star Wars, bud. I like the word "shenanigan". It sounds Irish.
INTRANSIT replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 24 May 2003, 8:56 PM
One of the last lines from "gone in 60 seconds". I guess this isn't the crowd for those type of shenanigans eh?
Bill Z Bub replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 24 May 2003, 8:51 PM
Lucy, you have some 'splaining to do!
INTRANSIT replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 24 May 2003, 8:46 PM
Yes, then. A nice hydraulic lift maybe?
INTRANSIT on Those Without Graves by Wulf 24 May 2003, 8:45 PM
Too tired to pick nits. Worth the read, definitely.