Bill Z Bub
replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub
24 May 2003, 8:42 PM
I guess I need to buy some lifts, 'cause that went right over my head. Eleanor?
Nice little stunt you pulled, tearing up the town....you and your Eleanor.
My, how you've grown!
Whoever just voted, please do so again, as I had one small edit to make. All done now.
Try this on for size. Okay, so it's really two separate poems squashed together. So What! I don't need your attitude mister! And furthermore, this poem was chosen to be published in "Butt Lust" magazine! So there!
Wecome,
to Poemranker Island!
*sets up chair, sits down to wait for -=Dark_Angel=-
"Ze prawne, boss!"
"SHUT UP!"
Its good...i hope to hear it to music...sounds like country, or soft rock
Welcome to Poemranker. I am your host, William Zanzibar Bubbington III.
"Boss, boss, ze prawne! Ze prawne!"
Okay, I'm not really your host. I'm just a bored regular. Are you a singer/songwriter?
Bill Murray?!
I loved him in "Groundhog Day"!
This lyric reminds me of something that might be sung by Sheryl Crow or Joan Osborne or somebody.
How true.... how true. We do all wear masks, don't we? Not literally, of course. Not figuratively either. Masks aren't intended to hide your identity. They're decorations. The metaphor of masks for "acting self-consciously" is completely tired and wrong.
It's really beautifully poignant, Wulf.
The word love should not be used by someone who is only 14
u have no idea wut it is to be in love wit someone hell u barely are of age to consimate a marrage let along be ready to be in one
dont mistake every little thin for love ull just hurt urself
Anger MAnange ment i thought i had problems
But look at it this way u aint as bad off as this poem
I thought it was good
My life means nothin to me sometimes too
we all wear masks to hide wht we are
but past the lies lay ourselves but are we hiddin the truth from the worl or hiding it from ourselves
good poem got me to think
wht?
nice
real love can hurt be careful u dont mistake it for somethin else
btw i have a poem by the same name
thts real good man but not as good as ur others
and when crit me remember i am only in H.S.
Dude give up tht sucked i couldnt even finish readin it