Shardik
replying on Pinjur by Shardik
21 May 2003, 12:34 PM
Your dyslexia is flattering, thankyou.
You know, Darlin', I never paid much attention to disrhythmic poems until your generation came along. And you are head and shoulders above the crowd. Next, please!
nice.
creepy. well done.
intriguing.
nice.
an i'm sure king midas is good at making trophies.
yee haw.
Robert K Foster
on Monday night football, Tueasday? War. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 May 2003, 11:02 AM
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it is more than shit. it is also more than a haiku.
it is like licking a spoon after stirring baking soda.
in here, you are words and nothingness....
even funner would be to be a homosexual invalid in nazi germany.
yeas. love leads to heartburn. well put.
an odd mix of trite and confusion. the cancer donation has me wondering.
darwinism. suicide is so close to murder, they are like kentucky cousins. I recommend against eaither.
Luminous beings are we...not this crude matter.
Your overconfidence is your weakness.
(note: all my poetry commentary will now come in the form of Star Wars quotes.)
"too easy to drift". true. it's too hard to pay attention when something doesn't say anything at all, rambling ambiguity rambilng redundantly in nothingness but repetition. Yeehaa maw. chicken feet.
(Ahem) Thats nothing compared to the big Crazy Squirrel Syndrome scare we had last year...