kassanna
on masquerade by lil cindy lu who
21 May 2003, 6:12 PM
This is great ...I love it
I bet you had trouble watching Kermit the Frog....anyway...good poem
HaHaHa you must have grown up in my home town...clever poem if I may say so
What?? I am in shock and dismay. What has happened to my horus (8).... Like a mutt sent away. Poemwanker, had I known, I would have given you shots long before demise.
why have you won the poemwanker award?
delicious?
that's more gay than you
thts good u seriously have too much power behind tht truck
Dude tht is so wrong
but funny
I know how u feel, not much here but gets the point across good job
wow thts really emotional cant even describe
i am truly impressed
I totally agree. I have just watched the most poignant film about sacrifice (war to end all wars) we should embrace our freedom so many died under extreme suffering to give to us. We have become tragicaly materialist and I appreciate your comment. There is so much more depth to you than I envisaged. Peace be with you.
wow tht really is good
i guess i have to listen when u give me advise now
great poem again now i see wut u mean by sayin u know how i felt
I think there are a lot of important messages we miss in our daily lives. In these troubled times of war and uncertainty, we are so often concerned with living from day to day that we forget to stop and discover the simple facts of love, hope and faith that are right under our noses. What do you think?
Please write more about the decrepit farmer and his jaded harvest. What sort of hat was he wearing? Was his face rotting away underneath it? Feel. Explore.
I don't have a problem with what a vilanelle is; what I was saying is that I don't see how the repetitions fit with the poem, other than being repeated for the sake of the poem being a vilanelle.
Yes, I think you are a gifted writer to be blunt, and the piece is gloriously descriptive and layered.
Too true, but, you should know, "I am your father;}".