nolan
replying on we're insane by nolan
16 May 2003, 12:28 PM
poetry isn't about trying it is about expressing yourself
Shardik
replying on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus
16 May 2003, 11:33 AM
Thanks, I also wanted it to metaphorically bridge the evolution of inventions, war, and biology with toys.
my favourite of yours so far, a lot to interest
Such a diverse use of language,
Most poems on here are so prosaic
this is more psychadaelic and exciting
Yes, interesting question
funny cute
but the last four lines a little too cute
We are here to test your beak to forehead ratio upon different modes of transportation. That, and to kill shit. Didn't you hear? Last night I bent a plastic spoon with a cricket powered shoehorn at ten paces from the hip. So, you're to late.
It's proper name is
Tab.
Oh, come now, you have to admit... this poem is damn tricky smart. Let's not pass it off on College governor liftings.
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AA! 9 lol. because my heart imploded. becaus my head is a robotic potato peeler.
Ye-es Are You German? If Not, Why Do You Feel The Need To Capitalize Everything?
Glorious.
AT LAST THE COLLEGE HAS UNBLOCKED THE RANKER!!!
I am now in a generous mood, have a ten on the house.
Ye-es what?
Ye-es
DON'T YOU DARE COMPARE YOURSELF TO THE BEATLES, YOU A FOOL AND YOU'RE POEMS DON'T EVEN RHYME
PATHETIC ATTEMPT AT POETRY
Marvellous as always Mr. B.
Hmmmm...I could be a foolish yes man like most other people on this site, but at the end of the day, this poem is a pile of pointless rubbish, but then again we've come to expect no more from you, so in one way its average, in another you could just be realistsic and say 'IT'S RUBBISH'
I once worked in a job where there was a rule about no bare midriffs. it was a rule meant for the ladies, I'm guessing becasue of the fear of horny bosses, but that's not important. what is important is that there was this ridiculously fat guy named jeremy who was fat in many ways, resembling a single celled organism. his belly used to sneak out of his shirt and hang down 6-8 inches below his belt, like jabba the hut's tongue.