horus8
on To dust by casey
14 May 2003, 11:04 PM
Opinions, unfortunately, go straight to dust too.
Surprise!
"Review of Another funeral hymn by horus8
N/R
Urban Western Goth
This song/sound pleases cinematically. . .the cross-weave of western desert acoustic & hip-hop/r&b is engaging, as well as the lyric references to psychic vampire, etc. Enjoyable mix! "
I thought you would enjoy this more then say some other layman.
"To met the big cheese" meet, but met's funnier, oddly enough. This was a bomber. Be proud. the other day my friend informed me I smelled like a giant roach clip. I wondered to myself, amazed, shit... No wonder no one has hired me in five years. Well almost no one. Pot head producers love my work.
Virginia, when you eventually come out from underneath all of those shiny poetry medals and Heretofores. I will still be here, stripped of my many almost poetic awards. Naked, reading the paper. Waiting for you to fix me a hero's sandwich, and organize my confetti parade for the new world record setting yawn I've just let loose.
The world passes over.
I watch from the peepholes.
Neither friend, nor foe
is welcome here.
I am hunkered down.
Waiting.
Watching.
Knowing.
Deep within this watchtower.
Protecting what is left.
Well hidden within a greying.
Folding hills, silent.
Opening fields, hushed.
listening to the rush
of distant rivers and
my heart thumping,
Aching, but still
undetected.
Safer, this sanctuary
These ancient walls.
My thick hide.
A guarded keep.
For heaven's sake.
Maybe I should ... ssssssss
Could we call this "Chode to the incombustible chia cricket" ? Thanks.
Well Said. -10-
Deeply touching but I'm not sure why. -10-
It's not a poem, either. here's a hot tip to assist in your 'artistic suffering': Step One, find a belt sander, preferably Black & Decker. Step Two: Apply genitals to said sander. Step Three: turn switch to 'on' position. Now get off the fucking stage, you polyp-picking little twit.
So u were the bitch and Aaron ur daddy huh?.............hahaha.....don't worry i know u'll get his ass too.....just don't try to write poetry next time
Well thank you.
A vivid, classy poem big on imagery and very flow like. 9
I'm glad I made you chuckle. A good chuckle is a beautiful thing.
Hello again Mr. Christof. Yes, much of this poem is a bit rubbish. It needs a lot and more work, and should be about a quarter the length. Still, it was worth a try.
Your new homepage is simply a work of infinite joy. I am moved. I knew you had the gift, but lordy, lordy. Sheer genius. As perfect as a steaming clump of peat.
"Yet heretofore" This opening was most delightful to mine eye. So was that you flipping me off then a while back with the greeting card? how you got a luscious asian hotty into the body of a 60 some odd year old lord of the graphic arts manor. A work of pumping valor, I tell you. I am wheeping openly in a tinfoil protected room currently, dodging solar flares, but I'll come out for some of your fine tutilage. And send me all of the books ASAP, I want to steal some of your sacred oats of regularitty.
Well, isn't this pleasant. Taming your hair again I see.
Just lovely.