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Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on CHAMELEON by Jeremi B. Handrinos 14 May 2003, 6:43 AM

One can merely pray for a miracle, i assume. Fodder in the wind.

<{Baba^Yaga}> on Continuation by baughworm 14 May 2003, 5:43 AM

Jesus, you are on junky patrol. Well i'm with you. Line those weak chisel chins up for inspection. Let's cop a feel.

Poetsettle on pee haiku by New Life Drug 14 May 2003, 5:37 AM

Seems the form of traditional Haiku, yet the first line denotes no season.

<{Baba^Yaga}> on To dust by casey 14 May 2003, 1:25 AM

Yes. God is the Devil. oops, can you dig that?

<{Baba^Yaga}> on Search Engine by OneFingerAnswer 14 May 2003, 12:55 AM

unfinished, but great. Suprise, bet you thought i'd never say that?.

baughworm on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL 13 May 2003, 5:42 PM

Just like the squirrel in the broke-ass car man. That was great.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Sanctuary by Lolly 13 May 2003, 3:19 PM

Wanktuary (Free verse) by -=Dark_Angel=- The whore pisses I watch from the peepholes neither friend nor my mum is welcome here I am hunkered down wanking watching deep within the crotchtower protected hidden well beneath the gray folding sheets silent listening for the rush of footsteps undetected safe wanktuary within walls no one will find out...

Lolly replying on Sanctuary by Lolly 13 May 2003, 2:37 PM

Thank you for the complement and for your suggestion. I think that thick does sound better,and makes more sense.

Lolly replying on Sanctuary by Lolly 13 May 2003, 2:35 PM

Thanks for your input. I am thinking of changing the last line.

horus8 on Wake and Bake Club by sir_heff 13 May 2003, 9:32 AM

What is this? Plan b?

Christof on CHAMELEON by Jeremi B. Handrinos 13 May 2003, 9:28 AM

This is surely the work of our old friend Horus8? Hope you get your will back

Christof on Cussedness by Nicholas Jones 13 May 2003, 9:22 AM

You have to admire Hobsbawm for that And I like this haiku, it made me chuckle. Chuckling is good and a very neglected art these days.

Christof on Homecomings by Nicholas Jones 13 May 2003, 9:18 AM

The last 4 lines are really good, I agree, the rest just a little bald and declamatory.

Christof on fuck that bitch by Lucifer 13 May 2003, 9:14 AM

Er, quite. Become a rap star maybe? Then you can spout this out and get to wear cool jewellery and stuff. Eek.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Wake and Bake Club by sir_heff 13 May 2003, 8:31 AM

Oh shit, you really have done more drugs than me!! I was just acting like a tough guy, trying to play in the big leagues, but you're the real thing!! I made up the whole thing about being quadro-spazzed on a life glug. There's... no such thing. I...I just...O Jesu what have I done?

sir_heff replying on Poems of Love by BleedingRose 13 May 2003, 6:34 AM

ummm ya......

sir_heff replying on Done with all the mess by ILoveUandHim 13 May 2003, 6:31 AM

ya you could say "That's a promise motherfucker, not a god-damn lie" that would prolly make you feel better to

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Blues by Christof 13 May 2003, 6:05 AM

Don't worry, mate! I'm sure you'll be a popular poete in no time! Why not write about what you did on the weekend? Or how about writing about something that interests you? A hobby, perhaps. Or even your favorite T.V show! The possibilities are endless!!!!111

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on fuck that bitch by Lucifer 13 May 2003, 5:27 AM

Excellent piece!! However, perhaps you should consider the distinction between "poetry" and "a series of uninteresting, mostly unconnected thoughts presented in a form whose only resemblance to poetry is its frequent line breaks". 10/10!!!!

Christof on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT 13 May 2003, 4:21 AM

Good to see you at number 1, couldn't happen to a nicer guy. And in this poem you've really let yourself go ans surpassed yourself. The sounds are brilliant, the mystery deep and the feeling of the earth is strong and elemental. Really, this is great.