Bachus
replying on blockbuster by bondjedi
9 May 2003, 3:14 PM
You do.
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Here's a better comment for you to skate board too.
I would of taken the time to read your comment if it wasn't completely assanine and reeking of contempt and chirpes.
I would say "great use of 'talk' to rhyme with 'walk'" but honestly! This HAS to be a joke. Good 1! "and don't forget about mob" -- genius.
I didn't ask. And I haven't a clue, or do I give a shit as to what in the fuck you are yammering about! how about you read the 39 comments above yours and chirp to those people, thanks! Art and poetry are two different things entirely by the way (unless you are writing concrete poems or da-da). Good luck on your search!
1st poem ever...made it in 3 minutes..sorry it was sub par!
oookk i know i dont have any room to talk since i havent logged in for like about 3 or 4 months but this takes the cake for the best/worst poem i ahve ever read. i am not sure wether to all it good or wether to call it bad because im sure of this: If i rate it 10 and say it is a great poem, on one of my ratings im sure to get from horus: ''you dont know what great it you are just some little bitch who still attends school and you cant write for jack so if i were you i would stop writing right now''. and im sure if i put something bad like: god horus your poems suck maybe you should stop writing you are just some gay fag who writes about his time on the street begging for mone to pay for his hospital bill because he got aids from some 'fag' on the street i am sure to get this kind of response on one of my poems horus: ''u little whore it is none of your business what i do and who i am'' and just on and on and on and on until finally i have to leave poemrankers or i have to do something drastic to make him/her stop so after thinking of all the possiblities of what could happen to me in the future for putting a negative/good comment i will rate him a 5 for it is between 10 and 1. Hopefully he dosent take the time to read my pointless comment and just browses around through the other ones and dosent think twice to read mine! I can only hope.
good but lacks potential....i shouldn;t be talking but i know how it feels to be put down because of writing but then again who the hell are people to be judging your 'art' as i would call it. all the poems i write i call them my art...why you ask well..because i have no other thing to do and i write my feeling as i feel them. They may not make sense to some people but to others they understand what i was thinking at the moment of creating the poem and they can relate to me..and those who cant relate to me they give me bad ratings..so think of it thise way i can connect with you on this one but dont think im going to let you get away with a 10 next time!
o god and i thought i sucked
Pardon? can you please induldge a simple man like me?
dude, pretty wicked gyno-rage. did some chick mess up your laura ashley sheets?. if so, was it worth it?
Friday the thirteenth part whatever.
Shit.
On a serious level the poem is almost grate! Grateful for rathering to die of course. the last line and title take away from it.
Like the second verse, quite clever.
and perceptive too
I quite like bob dylan too
Yes bob dylas an influence to me, like the stuff about reasons to live/ earthquake shelters/ pipelines
Left his socks on!!! What a FUCKING, literally and figuritvely, FAUX PAS!!! The poem though is quite viscous in its virulence. I know nothing though!