-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
8 May 2003, 12:55 AM
A ha ha! Splendid to the max! You've really captured a hearty, hilarious essential truth about the maxims of poetes in this hard-driving world we call Planet MacDo.
Have you ever stepped into a mound of your own used nappies so deep you thought God had pulled open his cheeks and you'd fallen in? I haven't. But I bet you have, you sick fucker.
Did the door hit your head when it opened? lying there on that double negative?
Nice.
Ha! Clammychowdher.
Improved.
Good Job !!!
Well, there goes my beaver sandwich and oyster pudding all over the bored-key.
handy to keep around for a mediocre date.
Solid enough.
Pederasty, pure and simple. Yes, die.
It's obvious, in America we call it hitting a nerve, or pushing a button.
"suf-fer-ring"? What the suffer-fuck? Great title, though. Almost, but not quite as good as Motorhead's classic "Killed by Death". However, sir, Lemmy, you are not.0.
Probably close to the stupidest thing i've ever read. It's funny though -7-
This isn't that bad. I like "for sleep means quick'ning next days pain," but besides that there isn't anything that stellar about this. -6-
I will have a think about that and see what I can come up with for the fairies. Thanks for the advice, I like the way this one's progressing.
That is, based on the assumption that 'anonymosity' is in reality a word.
Not deserving a blue 1, I wish people would say why they give these low marks but hey that's just me being a whiny Brit. Great poem, I wanted to give it an 8 but instead it shall have a nine to try to balance the anonymosity.
Yep, as with your last few I enjoyed this one a great deal. Really well done. 8