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richa on Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger 2 May 2003, 2:35 PM
yes, well redrafted very tight
Shardik on Sir John Betjeman is dead Nicholas. by Bachus 2 May 2003, 1:42 PM
Good god man. You are the boredest mother fucker alive, congratulations. Wait a minute... Am I fucking talking to myself? You see what sobriety does? Look at my fucking poodle?! Just look at her...*sob, weep, spasm* Look at my tofu ice sculpters (tofu is fun to freeze and chisel) Gaze at my supplements and pedestrian signs! HA! HA! I'm plum mad (kzsdfjghoabuiprvgioprbyfgiopv) that's the punchline to a welshian factory workers two series jokesky. called the bumsky from down undersky.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Remember by Luv2write 2 May 2003, 1:34 PM
Today's headlines: "GRAVY-SHAPED POEME TOO DISGUSTING FOR WORDS," SAYS VICAR "HELP ME!" SAYS MAN IN GROTESQUELY-WRITTEN-POEME UNPLEASANTNESS GUITAR-SHAPED BOY BREEDS FROZEN ESCAPE GOAT
Ranger on he was the one i had written about before i met him 2 by rockinindividual 2 May 2003, 1:21 PM
I love it.
Ranger on kruder&dorfmeister by rockinindividual 2 May 2003, 1:19 PM
Nice, opener is wicked. What more can I say? 9 I would love for you to let me know what you think of my latest effort, the fairytale one.
Ranger on Remember by Luv2write 2 May 2003, 1:14 PM
A sweetly written piece. I know you must love to write but submitting 3 or 4 at a time won't get you that far. Contain your poetry and submit it in smaller, bitesize chunks and let us savour each morsel. Right I'm talking bollocks now, I'll shut up. Don't cheer. Nice song anyway.
Ranger on Sir John Betjeman is dead Nicholas. by Bachus 2 May 2003, 1:05 PM
*sniff* Beautiful...so true to life. Fucking English cunts. Can't stand them. Heh heh heh...made me laugh mucho, I see you have an 8 and a 10 so let the average roll. 9
Ranger replying on Equation by Miggy 2 May 2003, 12:51 PM
Fair enough. I like these lyrics, they're showing potential.
Ranger replying on An enchillada called revenge! by horus8 2 May 2003, 12:46 PM
Most certainly.
some deleted user on Equation by Miggy 2 May 2003, 11:20 AM
Man for others! lol (if any of you were wonderin just an inside joke)
richa on Manhattan by night by bondjedi 2 May 2003, 11:04 AM
Some nice comments perhaps more smart than insightful
richa on he was the one i had written about before i met him 2 by rockinindividual 2 May 2003, 11:01 AM
flows well, bit like a flashbulb memory but needs elaborating a bit I think with some insight
richa on Baron Von Paranoia's lurid chap book by <{Baba^Yaga}> 2 May 2003, 10:58 AM
mad as a jimeney cricket and interesting language
richa on Too Long by Luv2write 2 May 2003, 10:56 AM
not quite enough creative bites here, but the use of contrast is good
richa on Sir John Betjeman is dead Nicholas. by Bachus 2 May 2003, 10:52 AM
Rhyming myfanwy with passage, betjemen would have been proud
INTRANSIT on Sir John Betjeman is dead Nicholas. by Bachus 2 May 2003, 10:44 AM
going... Going.... GONZO!!!!!
INTRANSIT on Baron Von Paranoia's lurid chap book by <{Baba^Yaga}> 2 May 2003, 10:36 AM
fyi in the world of truckin', the term (good buddy) carries a gay connotation. in the meantime, please send my appendage home. my apologies sir.
Bachus replying on An enchillada called revenge! by horus8 1 May 2003, 10:52 PM
And the my fingers? Are a big time 'a one bigtime longy chicky jew wongy' trust in that if say the cereal box goes a tilt gone.
Bachus replying on An enchillada called revenge! by horus8 1 May 2003, 10:50 PM
I change every day and every way. I have the my fingers around the neck of infinity.
w~* ATHENA *~w on Whales by Jeremi B. Handrinos 1 May 2003, 10:45 PM
nice from a leo, whales are safe. what of a lion in a dog pit. just finished a good read from clive barker. ask me.