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on dancing to be flowers by richa
22 Apr 2003, 12:05 AM
Yes, obtuse (one of those words we all learn in math and toss around later at frat parties as a sign of intelligence and breeding ability) but know, look it up. this poem is hardly obtuse. Scattered, symbolically riddled and a bit cryptic (just a tad) but not obtuse. Nice cleavage by the way, i pulled a load off to um last night and lost not a beed to bargain.
you would be so lucky to as have gestated at some point in the past, but I predict it more for you as a future event.
VIRUS U TWIT. how on earth do you expect a reader to take your comment seriously if out the gate you're legless. Good god. Viruses and bacteria are night and day man. It's like you just described godzilla to a japanese kid as a green prehistoric chilidog that hates big monkeys.
Word up chitlin!
Okey dokey. you go coda chrome. go like kitty to yarn, and i'm going to go to the head now. (give yourself another ten for nailing it!)
Noone really knows what concrete or dada poetry is.
By someone who does.
Honestly if I thought there was hope I would offer. Sorry if I s(ee)m vague or ru(d)e.
Cute, but no, i'm not a p&k ha ha just kidding kind of guy, and it's 1 out of 5 chances, watch. GO FUCK YOUR FACE IDIOT, wow, i got it in one, amazing, and no i'm not kidding. Cripples dressed up as jestors covered in shit do not make much of a chess game for me these days. Pull out your comment for that.
TTFN
P.s. here's the missing comma.
""Indeed princes zoe is not dickless in the way that you are, just a normal girl.""
Jinxing myself? What are you 10? Peed off? How can you tell, by my phrasing or my choices of verbs? ( Now that my gaye little 4 by 4 buddy is sarcasm, take note. In case your doodles of gaye pyrgaits and vessels of hollowed out turds and bending gold encrusted badminton raquets blurs your ability to differ again.)
nice images. a little obtuse?
Beautiful, esp. last four lines.
After I read this poem and reading all of the comments I investigated for myself the origin of aids. It was actually a bacteria found in monkeys in south Africa, you wanna know how it came to America? Some sicko did a monkey in the bum, contracted the disease and then did his gay friend in the bum who then turned around and did about 25 others gay guys in the bum. Before you knew it gay people were havin sex with women durring their threesomes and gave it to them. So when the infected women did it with straight guys they got it too. All becuz some dude down in Africa got lonely and raped a monkey in the bum, now THAT is sick and disturbing. If all you people really think this is a horrible disease then you wouldnt stick up for gay people, what they do is unnatural and debase, more aids are passed between gay lovers then anyother source. I find it horrible that innocent people contract this disease and have to live with it. But that doesnt happen exponentially, what does happen alot is gay guys doing other gay guys up the bum. I cant for the life of me understand why anyone would think that homosexuality is normal, IT ISNT, waste comes out of your bum, a bum was not designed to have a wiener in it. What exactly does a penis in the bum do? Nothing! A penis goes in a vagina!!! Its that simple, you do it for making babies and populating the planet. IF the whole world were gay it would die and nothing would last very long. Two men cannot have kids, all they can do is have gay sex and spread diseases. Homosexuality is a mental disease, you are not born with it you slowly become it from what you do. PEOPLE think before you stand up for gay people, they dont need you to stand up for them, what they need is counseling becuase they are screwed up. They need love, just like any other person with problems.
After I read this poem and reading all of the comments I investigated for myself the origin of aids. It was actually a bacteria found in monkeys in south Africa, you wanna know how it came to America? Some sicko did a monkey in the bum, contracted the disease and then did his gay friend in the bum who then turned around and did about 25 others gay guys in the bum. Before you knew it gay people were havin sex with women durring their threesomes and gave it to them. So when the infected women did it with straight guys they got it too. All becuz some dude down in Africa got lonely and raped a monkey in the bum, now THAT is sick and disturbing. If all you people really think this is a horrible disease then you wouldnt stick up for gay people, what they do is unnatural and debase, more aids are passed between gay lovers then anyother source. I find it horrible that innocent people contract this disease and have to live with it. But that doesnt happen exponentially, what does happen alot is gay guys doing other gay guys up the bum. I cant for the life of me understand why anyone would think that homosexuality is normal, IT ISNT, waste comes out of your bum, a bum was not designed to have a wiener in it. What exactly does a penis in the bum do? Nothing! A penis goes in a vagina!!! Its that simple, you do it for making babies and populating the planet. IF the whole world were gay it would die and nothing would last very long. Two men cannot have kids, all they can do is have gay sex and spread diseases. Homosexuality is a mental disease, you are not born with it you slowly become it from what you do. PEOPLE think before you stand up for gay people, they dont need you to stand up for them, what they need is counseling becuase they are screwed up. They need love, just like any other person with problems.
Is this poem supposed to be shaped like a beehive?
If people are thinking about that flick, then I would say I've gone awry.
You need some concrete. To grind off that chrome.
well guys thanks for the constructive comments on my work. i really appreciate your guidance!
To-day is -=Dark_Angel=-'s birthday. Good day.
And I liked this one better than the first...
I thought this Poem was good..
The only songs of yours I have personally listened to for long enough to hear a complete lyric are your "interesting" rendition of "The Crutchling" and the one where god'swife is droning on about her uterus or something. But I'm sure Settle and the other members of Club -=Dark_Angel=- are big fans.
Also, I'm having trouble understanding "indeed princes zoe is not dickless in the way that you are just a normal girl." Well, not really, it just seems beyond even you to assert that princesszoe isn't a normal girl but -=Dark_Angel=- is, and the reason she isn't a normal girl is that her dicklessness is somehow a separate affair from her being female.
You get really peed off at sarcasm, I have noticed. Don't bother with the "haha man I was joking had you going" reply, because I have already written down exactly what it will say, so you will literally be jinxing yourself if you post it (taking into account the time difference) and you will have to wait for someone to say your name out loud, and they only have about a 1 in 600 chance of getting it right what with all the usernames you've commandeered.
TTFN