Ranger
on Havin a Slash by Blade
22 Apr 2003, 10:23 AM
Dude, what the fuck? I assume you're not talking about your own brain, cause on the evidence of this you wouldn't even notice if you shat it out. Funny poem though...
(0 to try and get you into the bottom 15)
Even better! The breeze is used much more effectively this time. 9
Cheers bud, I'll have a look and see what it's like in sonnet form.
not your best work. good though
i think you should revise the last 3 lines
i feel like that all the time.
and your probly "worthy" of more than you think
Hey dude, can't say i like most of your stuff but this one appeals to me. I feel i could elaborate for hours around the second section. A few grammar and spelling corrections and i would love it.
i love line 17 thats good shit!
Right on!
oh i agree, i just like to argue with him.....
replEnished. A religious Eminem? Liked it anyway.
bingo.
1. "GO FUCK YOUR FACE IDIOT" isn't one of your usernames.
2. It can't be you who unjinxes you.
3. That you have based your entire life on "Gilded Stumps of Olde" and slowly realised that it isn't the Bible of Ace isn't my fault.
No. but I see the 'semblance. just wanted to float it.
you seem extremely nude.
you seem extremely rude. you make me furious. please don't bother replying.
it's obviously testicular cancer in remission, daft.