Funny but, it seems to ryhme too much(if thats possible) -7-

Yeah I know Exactly how you feel. -10-

spoken like somebody whose been tokin, but do why can't you pass that shit? Cause the bunny wants a hit! -9-

hmm, kinda plan

its ok,

i luv it

r u tryin to describe humility?

I love this poem very much. Last line 3rd stanza feels different than the rest; out-of-place sort of, thou I hate to critize such loveliness. Maybe it just takes some getting use to. I love saying it. Terrific vowels, and beyond that a strong idea. Good for you! Poems are no more than sketches drawn in sand, an instantaneous view, an instant need to tell. Funny to think of you, an artist, wiping grease off his hands on a red shop towel. In my mind I see you plaid and baseball cap, grabbing the hand rail and hoisting yourself up to the cab.

If this ever dissappears, I'll die.

But, it would be really ace if he washed his pecker off in the sink with some irish spring.

Lemmy & motorhead have a new song called the 'face of gaids' it jams. check it out.

Ummm... I know how it feels when everyone's mating around you... but not hanging from a tree... so I can't really relate.

I advise throwing an apple.

Lead in with gentle cliches then bang ' a placid pool' really makes this short poem

not sure i'm convinced, but quite clever nevertheless