sir_heff
replying on glazed point of view by sir_heff
23 Apr 2003, 8:22 AM
just playin' i always pass it ;}
strike 100! !!!!!barstards?????? It's bastards you ... (I shall refrain from insulting you further).
I don't mean to sound dumb but where exactly are you going with the poem? and are you trying to say Reminiscence or eminence in the third line from the last? I don't think reminence is correct.
It's the truth. That's what holds more truth.
YOU FORGOT JISM
AIDS isn't even a virus, you monumental fucking retard. It's a SYNDROME. An "ACQUIRED IMMUNE DEFICIENCY SYNDROME", if you will. HIV is the virus. A "HUMAN IMMUNODEFICIENCY VIRUS".
Sounds like a Kirk Franklin song. Spread the word Brother! :)
NICE EMOTIONS
NICE RHYME
YOU'LL BE A POPULAR POETE
IN NO TIME
If thats what came out, i say its perfect. if you try to hard to find something that sounds good, the point of your work will be lost.
I don't get it man. What's so fucking beautiful about it?
As I hang in a tree. When I read this, and I certainly relate to it, i see myself hanging, with a noose slowly tightening its grasp.
my my my. someone has been doing their homework.
this rocks.
Great poem. It's quite vague in some parts, then again it's hard to be specific on such a topic. I feel can really relate to lines 13 and on.
the short uncapped sentences really bring out the anger/frustration. interesting tool you have there. or lack thereof.
Hey cant you appreciate pure..... unadulterated.....sheer................. ...CRAp wen u c it
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA im quite mad really!!!>:P
whoa.
How about 'Orangutan' instead of 'Orangutans'?
Beautiful.
I feel like that all the time, -0-
Alright everybody just wanted to say that aids is a VIRUS not a BACTERIA, what was I thinking, apperently my mistake has annoyed certain people, I wont give you his name but it ends with an 8 and starts with borus or horus or whatever the hell it is.
Ok im sorry, the VIRUS, speaking of viruses do you just follow me around trying to make me look stupid, you do a good job, but thats not the point. The point is, stop leaving all these retarded comments after mine or on my poems, every body already know my poem suck you dont have to keep reminding them, man horus, your such a scallywag somtimes i swear.