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<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on Household Sex Agents (tooles) by <{Baba^Yaga}> 23 Apr 2003, 2:57 PM

special ed from crank yankers is funny when he jump out the window. huh?

<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on "Life can sure be a motherfucker." by <{Baba^Yaga}> 23 Apr 2003, 2:55 PM

I agree totally, thanks.

INTRANSIT on spring by <~> 23 Apr 2003, 2:14 PM

well.... so much for beer bottles.

cleverdevice on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike 23 Apr 2003, 2:13 PM

I feel I must make Blade's case, (God rest his soul), as his was always a piss-take view. He was never serious and not blatently offensive or insulting, merely irritating. I think if anyone should be 'got-at' its Bobjim. (Bobjim, its just boring now with the paedophilia crap. Stop it, stop it now!) Poor Blade, such a warm man, such a tender man, such a wonderful lover...

INTRANSIT on isms and ities by Amelia 23 Apr 2003, 2:10 PM

Don't ever stop reaching.....

cleverdevice replying on Loss I havn't yet known by cleverdevice 23 Apr 2003, 2:04 PM

I was just trying to counter the waves of false emotion I see here, friends and family all dying and what-have-you. Some of it could be real, but not all of it. Its fairly similar to how I'd imagine Phillip Larkin to write should he ever have deleved into Haiku form

cleverdevice replying on Loss I havn't yet known by cleverdevice 23 Apr 2003, 2:02 PM

revise, i don't know what you mean?

Ranger on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT 23 Apr 2003, 11:38 AM

Hey Mister Truck Driver dude, I read the other one you just posted but I don't have time to comment on both, but they're both cool! This one esp. I'm going to give this a 9 I'll be posting a new one soon-ish (hopefully) & would love it if you took a look and told me what you think to it! Cheers anyway!

BleedingRose replying on Truth in Lies by BleedingRose 23 Apr 2003, 11:37 AM

I see. Yet, can we not learn more knowing that someone has lied, than when they do not know how to express themselves with truths? Just a thought.

Ranger on Romans 8 by Freethinker1602 23 Apr 2003, 11:33 AM

Just remember-there's always somebody who's got it worse. Could I put in a request for a happy poem? Not to worry, hee hee! Anyways, I like the ending here-I'll give it an 8 Good morning everybody (unless you're over here in which case Good evening)

Ranger replying on "Mute nostril agony" Titled & inspired by Frass. by Bachus 23 Apr 2003, 11:30 AM

No worries!

Ranger replying on Havin a Slash by Blade 23 Apr 2003, 11:25 AM

Kickass!

Ranger on spring by <~> 23 Apr 2003, 11:23 AM

Hi z, it's nice to see you back-you haven't logged in for a few days from what I've seen. I was beginning to worry for you. Love the poem...it's perfect for a haiku (which I suppose is useful!) 9 I think would be a fitting score.

Ranger on Loss I havn't yet known by cleverdevice 23 Apr 2003, 11:19 AM

Hey cd how's it going? Have you revised anything yet? I most definitely haven't. Ah well. Nice poem, short (heh, it's a haiku), blunt and certainly true. It's already garnered a 7 so that shall be the standard by which I shall follow. Good Evening, sir!

richa on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT 23 Apr 2003, 10:20 AM

good rhyming I think this is key to this kind of writing

richa on spring by <~> 23 Apr 2003, 10:15 AM

I don't quite get its meaning, still i don't care much for meaning words are only an analog this could mean a million things all good

Caducus on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT 23 Apr 2003, 8:58 AM

With exception to that poem about you ripping the guts from the clock, this is your best, highly deserving all the praise. I've read 2 brilliant poems today and before thats spoiled I am logging off - 10 Cest Parfait

sir_heff on Household Sex Agents (tooles) by <{Baba^Yaga}> 23 Apr 2003, 8:53 AM

many improtant lessons in this..... very good 10

sir_heff on "Life can sure be a motherfucker." by <{Baba^Yaga}> 23 Apr 2003, 8:48 AM

very moving, i really like the last part about quoting your self befor you get to say anything :) when sobrioty blows... smoke a bowl. when reailty nocks.... turn your locks.

sir_heff replying on Truth in Lies by BleedingRose 23 Apr 2003, 8:40 AM

ummm....... i dont really rember what i put.... anyway, its damn good, i have had that idea on the tip of my brain for a wile now, just havent found the words.....