Caducus
replying on Before The Miscarriage. by scitz
24 Apr 2003, 8:16 AM
what do you mean by fuck all Z?
What do dogwoods have to do with it? I'm not being fresh, I really want to know.
lovely.
fuck all.
now, critically speaking, eliminate the rhymes. they cheapen it.
not as good as your other ones, at least in my opinion.
still not bad, and mostly better than mine.... bastard
I like the theme. BTW hurst = hearse. Only reason for semi-low score was that im not too big a fan of the "every-line-ryhmes-with-the-next" format.
Do all of these shows. together.
vulgar and lazy.
wretched. since that's the point, i give you an 8. well done
...and titties
the funny thing is that's my phylosophy some where many people have it worse. Sure my life is screwy but I thank god it can go away.
and cool beans about kirk franklin....I strayed from the light
Insanity is abandoning the same place the sane man is standing. This diagnosis is handing a prior notion demanding we all have an equal understanding. This is why we see people landing all over the spectrum of sane to insane, and it's no true reflection cause a brain is a brain. But somehow that's no exception. we're expected to reach perfection
lines two and three are beautiful, but of course sad as well
why would you consider it a confine
to cause one's words to ryhme?
do you think it not a rythmic design
for as such these sounds to intertwine?
beautiful...10
you'll love this:
http://www.michaelkelly.fsnet.co.uk/karl
Settle doesn't love you like I do.
My dearest richa,
I hope the comment left this morning under the guise of my user name did not offend you in anyway. Perhaps you have already noticed the subtle difference in our epithets, and the absolute difference in our styles, but just incase it escaped you, as it did me for few minutes, I am sending along this comment to underscore the facts.
NOTA BENE:
Beware the post-S apostrophed cognomen, it is a faded and jejune facsimile. I caution you and all other darlings to distinguish between the geniune article; the pre-S apostrophed wife of god, and this tasteless imposter. Pax vobiscum.