Another Bobjim?!?!
replying on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub
10 Apr 2003, 9:29 AM
I can live with settle, but the un-origional trolls who follow him around to try to get some sort of a sad life are too much.
Nice poem Bill, but didn't really connect with me, so I won't vote on it. Listen to the suggestions and re-post it later.
Nice. Very nice. Have a 9.
On second thoughts, how about 'She's scared ans she's tired and she's mortally hurt' as a last line?
Make it a lyric, and maybe another line or two. It doesn't seem quite finished.
well my chemistry is now done and handed in! i mean msn messenger its part of hotmail and is a form of instant messaging where u put in the persons email and if they have msn annd are online u can talk to them - im sure u have something similar!
i guess thats the good thing that this site allows people to express themselves in as many different ways as they want to and cannot be judged for it. (i have nothing against gays either btw i have had many-a lesbian pursuit! hehe (o:
Z,
Please ordain me with both. This is about the effect my father had on me being able to get close, one fears one is a tad frigid when it comes to the physical aspects of our desire. When I close my eyes I see my father who never held me, I wish he had, apparently they do, some of them. He wasw not present whilst this one side tenderness occured.
Oh hickory dickory what have I done posting this, should I remove it, will people think I a freak Z?
pig,
what do you want from me? editor's comments, or a woman's comments? or both? rsvp, z
From now on, I'm just going to delete all trollings. BOYCOTT SETTLE AND HIS ILK.
I did delete your comment and yes I have many poems in the loft but I have to be honest about myself on a site where alter ego's mask ones selves.
As Samuel Butler once said: 'Man is the only animal that can remain on friendly terms with the victims he intends to eat....until he eats THEM.
Go back to channel 16 on your TV, i am quite okay thank you.
You don't have any kids, do you? :^)
Why did you delete my other comment? Anyway only you could have but in my hotel room i found this and thought hmmm I wonder why you posted such a personal poem. I like it a lot because I know you can belt out some real gold and this you have chosen to be frank and honest.
Take care amigo.
Preferbly navy blue, or the cool picture ones.
That is a truly random comment....
I don't eat pie....I'm vegan.
Ya know, some people might actually try that link, I pray for their souls, I mean come on, DA and P&K. I know their...a package and all, but goodness, Why they have to show it to the world is beyond me. That kinda stuff will turn a gay man straight, or a straight man blind.
Everyone likes pie!!
This one's actually pretty good, just remove all the "her bits" at the end (put them somewhere else). The last stanza is a touch uninteresting.
Yes I want to hear it in real vivid audio you mankisser. YOU DIRTY MANKISSER!! btw I don't care if you do bite ears I still love you like my own child. Not as much as I love Boz Scaggs though. Sigh. What a voice. What a sound it makes.
A little to repetitive, -3-
Bill, I dont know why you let him get to you, He's an idiot.
Until the aliens kipe what makes them a pair.