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Ranger replying on Frozen Angel by Ranger 5 Apr 2003, 9:36 AM

We do indeed, I'll tell you later. Thanks for your comments!

Ranger replying on Spring Rolls by Ranger 5 Apr 2003, 9:33 AM

That's okay, I get the impression that it's not that great as a meaningful poem...I've got plans to change it, but it'll take a while. See ya monday!

Ranger replying on Beauty, sleeping by Ranger 5 Apr 2003, 9:32 AM

Thanks GW, I am a musician but not very knowledgeable one...but I know what you mean. Thanks for your advice, I like this one but I also like your suggestions so I think I'll write it again to compare. Always appreciate your suggestions! (What's rampion?) Thanks once again!

Ranger on Our Sweet Lady Lispalot by lunar 5 Apr 2003, 9:25 AM

Hey Lunar, just noticed you're online too...can't stop cos I've got to go out, but I still think this one's great! 9

Ranger replying on Sublime Street Morals by thepinkbunnyofdoom 5 Apr 2003, 9:23 AM

I noticed. Quite a good poem! I like the ending-the final line wraps it up nicely. Good stuff.8

lunar on Sublime Street Morals by thepinkbunnyofdoom 5 Apr 2003, 9:22 AM

This is really good - did you make it all up yourself? (not that im doubting your abilities)

Ranger on Which Ever Way The Wind Blows by Katie 5 Apr 2003, 9:20 AM

I've just seen your profile and I think that you're the best teenage poet on this site! How's Florida at this time of year?

lunar on Fate by Dostoyevsky 5 Apr 2003, 9:19 AM

Whos it about?

Ranger on Which Ever Way The Wind Blows by Katie 5 Apr 2003, 9:17 AM

This is wonderful! It's a shame nobody else has looked at it yet. I love it all. 10

lunar replying on W.A.R. by lunar 5 Apr 2003, 9:15 AM

Very nicely said but i want you to loook at my newest poem - theres comment from you on it! im relying on you here....!

Ranger on Bizzare by Bobjim the II 5 Apr 2003, 9:10 AM

And I thought you were joking about the whole sickness thing. How silly of me.

Ranger replying on A Haiku-cum-thingy (really) by Bobjim 5 Apr 2003, 9:08 AM

You still can't spell plagiarised. I keep telling you how to. Grr. You didn't listen to that Jeff Buckley CD yesterday. Bastard. Oh and before I forget, I will grease the wheels that will carry you to the bottom fifteen with a nice slippery 0.

Ranger on Ode to necrophilia by Bobjim 5 Apr 2003, 9:05 AM

Not nearly enough zeros. At all. Here's one more for your count, though, young Bobby J.

lunar on Frozen Angel by Ranger 5 Apr 2003, 8:52 AM

i like this one best. who is bobjim btw? do we know him at college?

lunar on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger 5 Apr 2003, 8:49 AM

Yourr poems are too good for me to understand im afraid im not into all this gramatically correct rhythem stuff - all your stuff is good and very well written you would find them in a book of poetry which is why i dont relate to them! X 8 tho

lunar on Spring Rolls by Ranger 5 Apr 2003, 8:37 AM

Ive seen this one before too. it doesnt really speak to me im afraid

lunar on Beauty, sleeping by Ranger 5 Apr 2003, 8:36 AM

I have commented on lots of your poems that were similar to these but i see you like to reedit quite a lot and i forget what they were like in the first place! but this is funny and seriously random which is alwayys a good thing! X

lunar on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger 5 Apr 2003, 8:32 AM

very good! 8

TruthlessHero replying on Independence? by TruthlessHero 5 Apr 2003, 8:23 AM

Um.. no

thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Sublime Street Morals by thepinkbunnyofdoom 5 Apr 2003, 6:37 AM

Yes it does.