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Garrett S Sexton on sic homina ad papyrum by bondjedi 5 Apr 2003, 12:41 AM
GREAT 4 U,GREAT 4 ME,GREAT 4 PRIESTS.
Garrett S Sexton on Independence? by TruthlessHero 5 Apr 2003, 12:31 AM
iS THIS ABOUT Star Wars as well
Garrett S Sexton on Say Hello by Sawa 5 Apr 2003, 12:24 AM
HELLO
appropriate, dead center, and beautiful. i inaugurate the Voracious Ouroboros Awarde, granting it to you, for you willingness to augur with your own intestines. (even the fucking title eats itself)
I smoked the grass on the otherside and it was bedder doo.
I smoked the grass on the otherside and it was bedder doo.
You should have that looked into smiley. You might wkae up only to find that dream of falling off a cliff to be true -9-.
Eat less junk food.
thepinkbunnyofdoom on Prayer for Peace by razorgrin 4 Apr 2003, 3:50 PM
What War???
fuckity fuck!
<~> on Prayer for Peace by razorgrin 4 Apr 2003, 1:56 PM
http://www.mnftiu.cc/mnftiu.cc/war.html 2, 2, 2 requests in 1!!!!
athena! athena! let down thy buns! hahahah! nice.
god'swife on I shot speed by horus8 4 Apr 2003, 1:31 PM
Fuck, how do you do that? I love this thing. 100
god'swife on Beauty, sleeping by Ranger 4 Apr 2003, 1:16 PM
Stick to the first story, I was so interested. Is it really "bed" be more honest, direct, about this prison. Forget the pheonix, too out-of-context for this fairy-tale. L12-13 is gorgeous. Think about that, follow through. Never, ever speak of yourself in the 3rd person. Well that's an exaggeration, but it usually comes accross as pompous. Hers was not an apple. Hers was a jetplane. A 21st century Icarus. Wanting to fly Out of the spell. Breaking tower glass. Escaping labyrinths. She day-dreamed a Prince, spinning Her hair into a golden ladder Climbing past her needy mother. Swinging the windows open. I attempted a rescue, but the thorns The thorns got her first, and after all, I still had a kingdom to manage. Me and my stallion rode away and left her to stamp and throw rampion... You've got to carry through with this story. It's ok you started with Icarus but stay Rapunzel, if you know what I mean. Are you a knowledgeable musician? Do you improvise? It's the same here. You must listen for what sounds right. Sometimes the words don't make sense but the rythmns and the vowels are make up the melody, then the words comes. Just keep doing it. Set high standards for yourself and read, every spare moment. I see promise here.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Say Hello by Sawa 4 Apr 2003, 12:41 PM
The sun is a masculine entity. The moon feminine. Ruby's masculine. Emeralds feminine. To call the sun a she is practically counter effective. Like calling your mother 'dad' after shaving off her pubic hair and gluing it to her face.
Tintagiles replying on Shelter by poetandknowit 4 Apr 2003, 7:21 AM
I can think of worse fates... Be nice or you won't get your present.
razorgrin on Morman On A Bike by Blindproject217 4 Apr 2003, 6:55 AM
I had pet Mormons over the summer. They were adorable like Golden Retrievers. I taught them about Discordia and S&M. They left as better people.
razorgrin replying on Shelter by poetandknowit 4 Apr 2003, 6:40 AM
You'll both find yourselves incarnated as orcs if you keep this up.
Stephen Robins on I'm Pissed by NewbieMe 4 Apr 2003, 3:14 AM
piss poor, I suggest you pull the trigger.
loneshadow29 replying on F**K The World by loneshadow29 3 Apr 2003, 8:26 PM
Nope... not down in the dumps, although after a few trips you tend to stink, I've been doing well thank you very much. Just saw too much hate in the world and it just pissed me off. That's pretty much it.