loneshadow29
replying on F**K The World by loneshadow29
3 Apr 2003, 8:24 PM
Yup, that's me. The southern shadow hehe :) I agree, love the world, but I'm seein too much crap in the news, on the streets, and at school and it just seriously pissed me off. Funny how things go that way huh?
Nah... just seein too many people getting hurt, screwed (metaphorically speaking of course), abandoned, and abused... and the words just came out. Somebody blew up your Indonesion Disco? Damn dude that's harsh.
p.s. I love the last line.
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Blindproject217
replying on Bible Quoting Fag Killer (So it is said) by Blindproject217
3 Apr 2003, 4:46 PM
Thanks ranger, I will. And I think I might just write a poem about that.
How about how jessica Lynch hails from Palestine West Virginia? Isn't that Lynchianly appropriate? A quote from her dad "those folks that rescued my daughter were a brave bunch of people" I wonder how he's going to feel with an ethnic son or daughter in nine months. Let's take a moment to pray shall we. Dear whoever wherever could you please give me more psychic powers so that i may change my channel without getting up or looking for the remote. Thankyou, oh and could you give the rag heads some back ground music to their machine gun dance the next time a farmer shoots down an apache with a sling shot. It would help me absorb their glee a whole lot more since i've been warped by music television and the family feud. In the name of the father, the son and the holy toast (i mean spirit as in grey goose chilled without a glass). thank you lordy.
Yes eyes can be fooled. They often fool themselves but I'd much rather have fooled eyes that believe something on false proof than have no eye acccept something on blind faith.
I'm glad you like it. :)
eyes see, but that does not make it real. eyes can be fooled, and easily too. still, i like this.
fine. how's ham on rye? and you can get your own goddamn coffee.
Yes and don't you also find it strange that whilst we chant in pious tones of charity and goodwill to all men, our reaction to the common beggar in the street is always to tread on his bollocks and vomit on his face. There's so much hypocrisy in western society that I sometimes feel like trampling a beggar's bollocks and vomitting on his face. Then maybe things would change. But not until we do something about Palestine. I'm all for an independant Palestinian state IN PRINCIPLE, but is that really the correct spelling of Palestinian? Yes. It is.
Rapunthel.
What happened? Did they blow up your Indonesion Disco too?
I'd lose "No more bothers."
But then again I have an Oedipus complex.
Garrett S Sexton
on Bible Quoting Fag Killer (So it is said) by Blindproject217
3 Apr 2003, 12:26 PM
I'm soooo bored of war.I know lets all go back to R.I.P poetry.
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So how's this for boringly ethnic?
punyemas, wag mong basahin kung hindi mo gusto, leche :)
Heh!
Could you please not be so boringly ethnic? It makes my morning coffee chill more rapidly. That alone is reason enough to attack you with powerful black magick... And tuna bagels.
Sarcasm! Mr. T, I would like to take this opportunity to be really really selfish and ask you if you'll let me know what you think to my poemes because I respect your ability.
You rule, Dark Angel, I've never laughed so much to a comment!
Alternatively you could write about a shoehorne. That's a feat that I've not managed yet. Throw in a couple of prawnes, a pair of soiled underpants and a pirate's nest and I think you'll have written pretty much the perfect poem. Let me know when you've done it, I have a ten waiting.
I agree with Tintagiles, the last line should be 'prawne', not 'pawn'. At least that's what I thought upon a first read.
I'm glad to see that you're a nice person, however don't be too Kantian in your life because as I've found it's a pile of crap and people will take advantage of your niceness. Just get along with everyone who deserves it. Take it easy, write what you want and enjoy it.
Good Evening to All.
Give this a twist towards the end, dedicate it to your mother rather than someperson we'll never really know about. If you want to keep the subject the same then it needs more complexity and slightly less cliche. I quite like the opener/concluder.