Ranger
on why can't i say 'teabag' on the radio? by bondjedi
3 Apr 2003, 11:24 AM
Fair enough...
See you later dewd! Take it easy, and leave a message on pr as soon as poss.
Please may I ask you to let me know what you think of my latest efforts?
Love it!
oh, come now
its so true, 10. glad im not on the list
don't go!!! come back!!!
It is a total waste of time talking to you. You are so cosmically stupid that you can't understand an idea unless it fermented in your mind, and when you do come up with an idea you're convinced it's an original, beautiful, deeply true idea, and you refuse to let it go or accept that anyone else has ever come up with the idea before or that it has any flaws.
There is nothing 'deeper' 'behind' this poeme. If you can't grasp the complete substance of it in one or two readings, you are a dunce, and if you try to reassure yourself by imagining there is something deeper behind it, you are three times the dunce.
You have had ample time to get the point of -=Dark_Angel=-. You haven't got it. You plainly aren't going to get it. You are just embarrassing yourself by publicly announcing your thoughts on -=Dark_Angel=- and his poemes. It is in your interest to let go and find a hobby that isn't so badly beyond you. Furthermore, you are a cad. Good day to you, Sir.
"He" is the subject of the poem. Of course "He" is going to show up. Not to mention that the point of a vilanelle is repetition.
Still haven't lost your autofetish about being blonde, I see...
*giggles* Interesting. Yet I like the flow of it, and all, So I give it a -10- ;) Granted I dunno what a mormon is but yeah... :-\ blonde moment! lol, just messing :P Good Poem Blind =)
Thankz for the tip blind, it's nice to see that there are a couple of people still around here that actuall give advice. =) And some of my friends also write poems, and such, so I will ask them, thanks agian, I really didn't even think about showing them, I kinda never let them read my stuff, I'm shy about things like that, lol :P Katie shy!? yup yup! lol. =)~
Ps. Watch out for those Buffalo Eating Fruit Loopz ;)
ita--this has a lot of potential. your last stanza is awkward; you've forced it to fit. check your punctuation, as well. nice job.
oh my, this made me chuckle.
thanks for a laugh.
nice but you could work a lil more on the ending but hey thats just my opinion :)
"Trina"
nice:)
thanx:)
At the University of Cambridge, Cambridge, England, I have been accosted by mormons in black suits and ties on no fewer than six separate occasions. They also wore black trench coats and had immaculate side partings. I once asked one of them why they wore such clothes, because a number of my colleagues had voiced concerns that they looked rather like agents of the gestapo. Their response was that the Holy Spirit is clean so one should always try to maintain a state of cleanliness when doing the Lord's work. At which point, I pointed to the Mormon's shoe and offered him a moist tow'lette. He looked down and to his horror discovered that he had been standing in the bountiful remains of an upturned nappy throughout the entire conversation.
Not really. That last bit was a lie. But that would have been pretty damn smooth, don't you think?
exceptionally good. i too have had the same experience.