FIRSTLY the mudvanye fellow is a stalker, SECONDLY the poem isnt as good as some of your others and THIRD you people talk of morality but its only mere opinion, there is no galatic right or wrong justs whats funny, and i think its funny the war with iraq. After all the amount of international laws broken by the maericans will land them in shit, firstly they themselfves have peraded iraq POW's on TV breaking the geneva convention, the US government has sactioned use of cheamical weapons on iraqi soliders (in contrevention of the UN cheamical weapons treaties) and finally the invaded a country with the aim of reshime change (TWICE!!) and that goes against international law, so its gonna be hilarious when they have to go to court of this (BUSH IS A WAR CRIMINAL!!!)

you're the worst god damn poet on this honkin' website and maybe in the whole world

sometimes you f**k the world, and sometimes the world f**ks you

Piper's Negligence ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ There once was some shit in a diaper Belonging to Baroness Piper I consulted her mum 'bout the state of her bum And she said she'd forgotten to wipe her.

Hmmm. By the way, my comments aren't all that rare. I only commnent on things I like, rather than slagging people off.

if i did drugs would i understand this?

Very good, Keep it up.

Good job!. just dont OD :P

Good job!. just dont OD :P

I like it, its just that last line... "as my hapiness dies" i dunno maybe i am just nitpicking. Very good.

Lovley, keep it up.

A masterpiece, keep trashin people in hilarious ways, -10-

Not so much the tugging or the white fury, but every morning without fail I have to do the bend and tuck. It fights back but I can tame it after awhile.Its worse when it salutes in your sleep and you role over, talk about a rude awakening. I give it a -0- for retarded truthfulness, I want this to be dominating the worst list. Way to go! p.s. great user name.

Your an idiot, and what the hell is up with all the "good day to you sir" "would you care for tea" "jolly good ol boy" ta ta tiddily freekin tiddily ta? But sadly, I like your poem, not becuase (like common misconception) its funny or crude but becuase i can see somthing deeper behind it. Jolly good and good day to you my boy, ta ta (I would give it a good vote but seeing that you hold the most poems on the worst list Ill help you keep it that way)-0-

adjectives & adverbs: white gray darkest fully angry loud absolutely clear troubled(waters of course, what else) raging bright sunny happy sunny Stop watching Nickelodeon and read The Colossus by Slyvia Plath. I give up, your all abunch of puddin'heads.

Jeez all this suicide stuff gets me depressed. I really like the first verse though, cadacus is right, The chorus is a little long. I have that problem sometimes when Im writing songs as well, mine are either too long or too short, I havent mastered the middle ground. I would suggest asking someone you know you likes writing songs to help you, that always helps with alot of my weak points. But overall pretty good. -7-