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on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america
26 Mar 2003, 8:30 AM
but will you come to connecticut?
One would guess Bobjim its in the top 10 for the same reason you are not. I see you have made sure it isn't anymore though. I apologize profusely that you disliked it, maybe your right, maybe your wrong, thats what I find so diggity dog about poetry, everyones opinion is so different.
love is a turkish prison.
however the romantic side of me can dig this, but you got the devil beating the shit out of my angel in this shoulders war i'm having 7
Behold, the man with the acid tongue !
atomic hopefull's - apt, very apt
A bit of a shocker this one. I think saying less on a subject of war says so much more at the moment because everyones a bit paranoid, concerned and disgusted and i for one feel so many thoughts, opinions, emotions inside about this damn war and your haiku says all it needs too, a diary of the times and no hint of patriotism (I am not saying you are not by the way) , smoke this: 8
mainly me. I said it. I just wanted it to be too young. we shouldn't fall in love. it screws every thing up and then when you see the person or hear them talk it is magically ok
Marvelis you my be but I still doubt your Divinty -7-
I just wanted to comment on your poem, I found it rewarding to read a poem that expresses your thoughts in your own personal life. Good Job and keep writing
Kinda reminds me of the first poem I wrote, My task, 8
Why the fuck is this in the top 10?
what the ///////////
Profound and thought provoking. Excellent -10-
right on
Glad you like it
Desperate times calls for desperate measures, I think you should aim for Bachus, throw the kelp and not miss.
Someone once told me we're too young to fall in love...I think I'll go slap that someone now.
My, aren't you the clever one.
Yes. Go down on me, bitch!
It's March.