Bobjim
replying on While mining in Tanzania by Bachus
25 Mar 2003, 1:54 PM
He might colinize URanus, honey, not mine.
Hart is a wild woodland deer ( or something).
Its alright, I was goin to name this poem Mindless Ramblings of an Idiot, but it seemed too long, I guess I was tired of writing all this pathetic higher plane kinda poetry where I ramble about my problems and worthless self existance. I wanted to write somthing mature, oh well
Delete the comment jeremi left hes pasted it from a comment I LEFT on poetandknowits work, sorry for the inconvenience,
good work here by the way, I owe you some time in looking at more of yours as you have mine --8
Pinkbunny, I dont know why Jeremi pasted my comment left on the recent 'Oxywarmonger' by poetandknowit, it has nothing to do with me but sorry its found its way on to here, thats unfortunate.
I have read this poem and think its a good surreal poem, 8. I was surprised to see this plagiarixzed comment, once again apologies, speak to jeremi who pasted it.
Hey! Ironically I'm looking at the author of this poem right now pace around his house ranting like jesus about current affairs. We are stoned prophets, actually i'm at his house using his new computer and dropping off some wine, and tucking his son in because he feels that his bed time story would have been too tainted. what a nice daddy bachus is. I have a feeling though, if pushed further, he might start a new religion, or colonize uranus.
Here, hold this ( Bachus hands her a head of kale ) you need more calcium, apparently, along with some creative writing courses on how to not write creatively. Because, we're hoping you're just dyslexic.
I like your poem. I don't know what that other comment is doing here.
Thank god CNN will at least put an end to reality tv... And you too, we can only hope. (what's that now like seven poems i've ranked, and still i'm fucking in a state of permenant yawn here? Excuse me). This is shit, pure, stinky, three day old and rained on (several times) shit, sorry about your luck.
"ADD testing" of course should be AIDS testing.
S-E_M_E_N. idiot. Oh, i'm sorry, my bad, that was you making a stab at humor? in that case 10! psyche.
Oh, and not even remotely bizarre.
Informatively useless.
About my comment on their being no evil, i was basing that on what Confucious's ideas were. The only question is who is evil and who is good. The Iraqi's and/or terrorists themselves dont think of themselves as evil, they think of themselves as the good guys, but whoever wins will end up being the "good guys", thats just how history works. So yes, there is evil, but it depends on the point of view you're at
I ment hallow. Only by asking yourself who you are, can ask yourself who you want to be.
Yes. Yes. No (bullets may be fast but knowing my luck I'd miss or something). Been there done that Think I still have a few scars from that, no wait those are the cigarette burns. Maybe It all depends on how good it feels. Nah! They give me my identity.
Now being serious I noticed 'new lesions'. Other than that I it doesn't look like you have any typos that I can see. This lacks you usual hint of detail that makes things what you write have some sense of depth, But I love how you pulled off the 'will you whimper and beg for release' line. -7-
I like to think so.
okay so my inbox says girls with buckets of cum on their heads and I'm like it must be hard to balance a bucket on your head
Huh??