thepinkbunnyofdoom
replying on Pathetic by openwounds
24 Mar 2003, 12:02 AM
K. No problem. Thanks for writing it.
Don't worry - there will be plenty more gore to come .. I can't refrain from writing of those things for long.
Wow! Quick style change. I was looking forward to more gore. Or angst. -7-
well i'd appreciate it if you wouldn't use it - sorry
and yeah, you're right. i just noticed the missing word - "know"
How very christan of you Blind. Way to set an example.
As for you open wounds you remind me of this girl I know. If things are as bad as you say they are then you have three major choice you can make. Either change things (Blind's way, or any other), Leave things as they are, be misearible, or option number three. Stop caring about being apart of the crowd and be as absolutly different as you can be. <=#3 could be considered option #1 but it being different isn't really a change for you I guess and its not really staying the same either.
Oh yeah I like this alot. I'd like to use your piece as lyrics for my band with your permission. -10-
Not to be mean or anything but I think your first line is missing a word.
Interesting work my good man, except for the list of your likely candidates. But, I'm surprised that after the months since I've last posted, people still remember me. Damn, did my poetry stink that bad?? If so, I can only say but one thing... F**K it. Have a nice day all :)
You know a bar of soap is the prefered method of cleasing ones self but I love the gore that comes to mind. 'they just laughed' would have to be the most creepy line. The 'Now I'm pretty' Fits so perfectly and will probably make alot of people quesy.
BOORAH GRANDMA AWARD. -10-
p&k's not a girl--he just looks like one!@
You know what you girls both need? A man. Like me.
okay, i cede you that. but i don't understand your point here. and the apparent carelessness with which you have structured the verbage. i agree with p&k--this started of screaming with potential, but ended: definitely a rough draft.
Ah, but to Blindproject it most certainly is .. you must see things from his/her point of view. Apparently they have never been exposed to this kind of writing - so they found it 'weird'.
What the hell is this? Woe is I?
NEWSFLASH: this is not weird or ".. daring".
Wow, who turned out the punctuation?
All right, thanks for the tips, I'll take them into consideration.
Well since my life is of no concern to you - don't wonder. I highly doubt that the thought of removing ones tongue was on the mind of any child at Columbine, not sure what that has to do with the poem, but ok. Also, I never said it was a joke. I take all of my poetry very seriously. And maybe the children at Columbine were thinking something like 'I'm never going to see my family again'. Of course, that is 'freeky weird stuff' right? Maybe not ..
hahaha! blondie!!!
(okay, well maybe if you used the batsignal, or called me on the batphone, but then you would have to let me in through the mansion, and i would have to slide down the pole!!!! and alfred would have to bring us scotch, neat, in oversized snifters!!! maybe, just maybe then i would. maybe i'd even wear my catwoman suit. rarrrr!) oh, but then i couldn't be 'pants-down' now could i????
duh! it's about an born-again obese agora/lineophobic pig!
If I invited you to my batbasement you would be there in a second. Pants down!