Hm...wow. As you can see religion is a touchy subject. Something that anyone and everyone is willing to argue with, since no two people have the same exact beliefs. Cheers to you for hitting such a controversial subject on a public site.

mmm...yet again a great unseen twist. I like your style. It's out of the ordinary which is always a good thing. Great poem, but again there were a few minor meter difficulties that can be fixed fairly easily.

Oo...Nice twist, good rhyme scheme, overall good poetry. The meter needs a little work but that is something that can be easily fixed.

Thanks for the inspiring words. I have friends that tell me then same, though I still don't believe it.

Wow...very powerful

So...ju wanna sleep wid da fishies...I tink we can arrange dat...

fingers are next, right? so no more typing in of poems???

so, you're in love with a necrophiliac medical examiner???? ew.!!!!

It sounds like you should just work out and beat the crap out of all these jerks, thats what I did. I was always messed with because Im a Christian. So I worked out for three months straight and next time someone made fun of me or pushed me around I kicked the crap out of them and made sure everyone saw, I didnt have anymore problems.

This is a incredibly disturbing poem.

you could put on more eyeliner. and add a few more piercings.

This is laxitive for the eyes

A VAIN ATTEMPT, W.OWEN YOU ARE NOT. NO OFFENCE BUT IT TAKES A REAL POEAT TO DEAL WITH THIS.