dove stai beatricce???

Please tell me. Do you actually believe that 'ur' is the spelling of that word?

If we don't go to war then it just means that thousands of Iraqis are going to be killed by Saddam in the near future, whereas going to war will mean a few people of many nations will die in the coming days or weeks. Which sounds more appealing? I don't mean at all to sound like I support Bush and Blair in this because I don't believe that their honest reason is the welfare of innocent Iraqis and the bringing to justice of Saddam-I'm sure that the oil controls their thoughts. However, we'll just have to wait and see. I do like the poem though. 8

Swap lines 5 and 6 and merge them. You have great potential, especially starting at such a young age. If this fulfills you, and puts a smile on your face, then continue to work at it. (9) I think you're close here. Very close.

Yes, Yes, quite true. I was hoping for the hippie ways of sex, drugs, and peace to come back and say "hell no we won't go!" but no. -10-

Good topical, socio-political poem, Jrm. It matters not how ridiculous antiwar protesters look, I'm more interested in their collective perspective for America and the world than that of Rumsfeld and Wolfowitz.

Cliche done with class. Very well painted words Caducus. -10-

All depends on the artist and how well they hide the piece of art in question.

Its sorta overly redundant in places like 'smell your sweet smell' and 'thank god;god has let us recieve'. I like this. -8- P.S. You might want to fix your typos before anyone else rates this (trust me people do take off for that here).