Poemranker [most recent comments (50521-50540) and replies]

thepinkbunnyofdoom on Tearing Me Apart (again) by intheailse 21 Mar 2003, 12:43 PM

Do you mean 'in your hand is my heart'. Good other than that. -8-

thepinkbunnyofdoom on Too Much by intheailse 21 Mar 2003, 12:41 PM

I like the ryhme scheme. Plus the flow of the words isn't that bad. Fairly good. -7-

intheailse replying on A Little Peace by intheailse 21 Mar 2003, 12:40 PM

why does it have to answer anything....if anything your'e supposed to answer those things, not me....

thepinkbunnyofdoom on A Little Peace by intheailse 21 Mar 2003, 12:35 PM

Drivel. oh umm... no... wait... Yeah, just plain drivel. There just isn't anything here. Not trying to be mean but you are way too vague. Who do you want to kiss your eyes? What are you afraid of the dark? Are you just trying to be confusing and pointless in your second stanza? A little peace of/from what? When your poem answers those questions (Or at least some of them) then I'll try and rate you better. For now (hopefully without hard feelings) I give this a -3-. Rewrite it and I'll be happy to give you a higher score.

<~> replying on Kooo Kooo DirectOr by wLeBlancw 21 Mar 2003, 12:31 PM

p.s. she died in my dad's bathtub, face down and naked. pretty goddamn funny, isn't it?

<~> replying on Kooo Kooo DirectOr by wLeBlancw 21 Mar 2003, 12:30 PM

everyone on the ranker does have the power of the 'i'm feeling lucky' button, sirrah. i'm the one with the pretty fucking special talent. just like you. only different. i'm pissy today, because i just came from a funeral, and i hated the deceased, so back the fuck off. it's not so cosy now, is it motherfucker?

Blindproject217 on Exiting Shadows by Caducus 21 Mar 2003, 12:30 PM

great poem, 10

thepinkbunnyofdoom on smiles from heaven by mckenzie 21 Mar 2003, 12:24 PM

Touching. I suggest you go over it and fix your typos(by rereading it because spell check misses alot <like angle in the 2nd line>). As It stands -8-

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw 21 Mar 2003, 12:22 PM

hook line and sinker lol

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Kooo Kooo DirectOr by wLeBlancw 21 Mar 2003, 12:19 PM

That's a pretty fucking special talent you have there, zzinnia66. If only everyone had the power of the I'm Feeling Lucky button, poemranker would be a wonderful, cosy place where anyone who breaks the rules would INSTANTLY have their poems removed!!

thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Who am I? by thepinkbunnyofdoom 21 Mar 2003, 12:14 PM

So glad you aprove D.A. :)

<~> on Kooo Kooo DirectOr by wLeBlancw 21 Mar 2003, 12:03 PM

http://www.ravenfilm.com/poems_1.htm

<~> on Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw 21 Mar 2003, 12:01 PM

http://www.megaera.org/Megaera/fall01/mercyrain.html

<~> on Klondike by wLeBlancw 21 Mar 2003, 12:00 PM

http://www.sffworld.com/authors/m/madden_philip/poems/frozen.html

<~> on The System by LeBlank II 21 Mar 2003, 11:57 AM

www.ravenfilm.com/poems_1.htm

<~> on Lost by LeBlank II 21 Mar 2003, 11:55 AM

read it here: http://www.ravenfilm.com/poems_1.htm

<~> on The Innocent by wLeBlanc IIIw 21 Mar 2003, 11:47 AM

read it here: http://www.megaera.org/Megaera/summer01/rain.html

Blindproject217 on Too Much by intheailse 21 Mar 2003, 11:19 AM

This is an awesome poem, I feel the same alot of the time, I know I have skill and potential but its all just a pipe dream unless I do something about it.

Blindproject217 on Tearing Me Apart (again) by intheailse 21 Mar 2003, 11:16 AM

Very nice

Blindproject217 replying on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger 21 Mar 2003, 11:14 AM

I like the "crickets song" its original