OneFingerAnswer
replying on My Tomahawk goes up, UP, AND AWAY! by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Mar 2003, 10:48 AM
Robbie is an ugly mo... umm... father fucker isn't he?
Maybe if you could point out some of your more serious stuff to me then? I really enjoyed the few serious ones I found but like you said you have lots of stuff on here. It's kind of hard to shift through it all.
OneFingerAnswer
replying on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer
21 Mar 2003, 10:43 AM
Thanks. I'll look at that. I wasn't trying to be a smartass. I welcome comments like yours.
Jeremi B. Handrinos
replying on My Tomahawk goes up, UP, AND AWAY! by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Mar 2003, 10:41 AM
What? You were under the impression that we thought you liked Mr. halford
wow cool, that's exactly what I do! And if I accidentally do have any meaning, I cut it out and re-embed it in nonsense by using words that rhyme or are spoonerisms of or have other relationships with the key words in the deleted sentences.
Apparently you think the aim of poetry is to take an idea on which you have only the vaguest of grasps, write down the first things that come to your mind when you think about the idea, and then try to confuse the reader with obtuse, meaningless sentences that at first glance look like ones that actually have meanings, so their grasp is made even worse than yours.
Well you're right! That is the aim of poetry.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on My Tomahawk goes up, UP, AND AWAY! by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Mar 2003, 9:28 AM
Fuck you. Every time I look at your comment I have to listen to Judas Priest just to get the fucking song out of my head, and I hate Judas Priest.
Nobody is "busted" or "a tawdry thief". LeBlanc III is Settle, and he's posting poems he didn't write on purpose to get people excited.
Sir, snake charmers go doodle blee blee chirpe whislee we and then the snake takes their eye. Not vice versa. What goes around comes around quit fucking whining. we'll eventually get ours Perhaps you'd rather be nerve gassed (vx is some nasty shit, that'll invert your nipples) at a bus station, or perhaps visiting your brother at work when some zit faced idiot with a left handed fatwah flys a cesna full of anthrax and c4 up your ass on the fourtieth floor. You obviously don't have kids. America is not after their oil idiot just tweedle dumb and dumber. After all that's what we have Venezuala for stupid. WE HAVE THE POPPIES! WE HAVE THE OIL. WE HAVE THE HARAM CHICKS. NEENER NEENER NAW NAW. America's god? please, you can't fit del taco that easily into my tiny little mind mate. cheers, enjoy the shove turtle dove
Jeremi B. Handrinos
replying on Monday night football, Tueasday? War. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Mar 2003, 8:05 AM
Tell me about it. I can still see the guy that the movie "born on the fourth of july" about wheeling around with a sign that says do you know who i am? As if he was a star or spokesman or somehow more credible then any of the playstation gum smackers going "wow dude, do you know who that was?... George Carlin" ahhhhhhhhhhhhh ha ha ha, yeah it was a joke. i went out to protest then i was so pissed at the idiots there. i started protesting against stupid young protesters that think because their dad was steven spielburghs hippy buddy they got some kind of obligation to the planet to be stupid playstation hippies going no blood for oil, but all of them with parking stubs in their back pockets from driving and parking there? What a fucking joke, at least in the sixties they had real poets, real drugs, real sex, and some descent spokespeople that halfway sounded interesting
Jeremi B. Handrinos
replying on My Tomahawk goes up, UP, AND AWAY! by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Mar 2003, 7:55 AM
I have a compendium of quite a few poems. Over a thousand, Actually. I have been writing since I was a very young man. In the beginning, it was about perfect sentences, grammar, spelling, punctuation, and structure. Now, it's about bagging the chicks, brewsky, and not falling on sharp objects at three in the morning. After all's said and done though, most would find the majority of my work to be excruciatingly serious and dramaticaly scientific and theoretical, and that's why I like to break away as often as I can to name drop and be a pop sop, but mostly just to fucking laugh and relax. That, my friend, is all folks. My way of taking mental vacations at the surf and spa
nicely done. the third stanza made me dance, as I made the mistake of attending a protest for shits and giggles yesterday. it was the most depressing spectacle I've seen in ages.
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replying on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer
21 Mar 2003, 5:59 AM
Apparetnly I am in some sort of a minority here suggesting some revision, but the redundancies in the first few haiku with "lost" rpeated and "loss" being so similar I figured you could probably come up with something fresher...same with "dawn".
ho-ho, busted!
the complaint link isn't working...
the male model is a tawdry thief.
friggin hilarious!!! let me get you a lawn chair and we'll nosh on red vines and watch eh?
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This poem was written by Harold Pinter in January 2003.
http://www.globalresearch.ca/articles/PI
This guy has sumbitted a beautiful piece of work and I think we owe it to our fellow artists to grant him the same consideration we would expect for one of poems.
Dear Sir,PLEASE LEAVE THE PIGS OUT OF THIS,
OneFingerAnswer
replying on My Tomahawk goes up, UP, AND AWAY! by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Mar 2003, 2:21 AM
"Breakin the law! Breakin the law!" I think that it was interesting to see the breaking of the rules of the form but I'd like to see more substance and meaning to your stuff. No offence meant by that. You're great with images and mixing obscure and pop references into your works but when they come together I'm often left wondering why.
If murder were the penalty for bad poetry there would be no poets. Every poet writes a stinker once in a while. Or maybe twice.
OneFingerAnswer
replying on Monday night football, Tueasday? War. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Mar 2003, 2:13 AM
"Fuck the what?" does make a more interesting question. The answer may be something to fear though.