Shardik
replying on Hecate, and the high hunt by <{Baba^Yaga}>
9 Mar 2003, 3:14 PM
How about your face? That would make a splendid metaphor, better then your acting.
What is this about?
Hey, LeBlanc. Go fuckyourself. Your poetry fucking sucks idiot. guess what? Go fuck your teachers too, they did a hoorible job, and also your priest? A fag, yes, a fag, so go fuck yourself, dickchin. I don't like christians, jews, or especially french prolife twits.You must be here for poetry... Because you don't have any.
By god yer reticence mocks me!
Or of course you could continue to ignore me in that mature supercilious manner of yours. Which, lets face it, is probably for the best. After all as that poet for all occasions once said:
Too Much Love Will Kill Ya!!!!!
I'm just the pieces of the man
I used to be
Too many bitter tears are raining down on me
I'm far away from home
And I've been facing this alone
For much too long
Don't hate me for loving you!
Hello Mr Pig
I also love you very much, and would like to add my praise and affection. However I wonder if it would be possible for you to answer my questions to you on your Cheetah poem (I'm ever so sorry that they are most inappropriatley phrased!!) Thank you very much
Your ever loving and affectionate
==Doylum.
Why thank you, I have written another poem under my other user name : Mr Pig (again), I hope you like it.
Sack after sack of american imported rice?
Sack after sack after sack after sack of
Cheep rice
Poor country
I'm not feisty, bum face.
ACHIEVEMENT? ACHIEVE THIS dsjdi721421*******!+):@?"?"~
Thanks you for not answering my questions!
oh
Dio has rocked for a long long time. Now it's time for him to pass the torch.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum
9 Mar 2003, 2:17 PM
A ha ha ha ==Doylum. You always were a feisty one. The mucus is composed of three parts trinitromethylate salts and one part human achievement. I call it "THE MUCUS OF ACHIEVEMENT"!
Quick boy take some lacromores we don't want a death by misadventure!!!! You've so much to live for!!!!111
Lots of superlatives followed by something affectionate and a very high score And just as surely lots of exclamation marks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and some random 1111111 and also a random letter perhaps an n or an s to end withv
Is it a special unwet mucus?
A dry mucus?
As opposed to a sweet mucus?
Also did zzinnia66 sense danger here?
Why am I asking questions that you willn't answer?
You never do.
He's behind you!!
Chuck es a wagon wheel Berwik!!!
Yep nice one
thanks bob!
But do read it please!!
If its not to much trouble!
And comment!!
Please""3231!
Ah, at last. I was waiting for a new haiku. This is nearly excellent, you're one syllable over, possibly change immaculate to something shorter? I love the first line though. You have such a great ability to control images, I would love to see you do something longer than a haiku...these things are over too damn quickly & The Blooding was great.
Right, that's me done for today, Good Morrow and God Bless you every one.
Ranger
on I cannot take this shit(please comment and critique) by TrulyUnique0642
9 Mar 2003, 12:40 PM
Too simplistic to get anywhere on this site-revise it and be a bit more creative with your vocab. Also decide whether you want to rhyme it or not because this just doesn't flow. That being said, I like the line "Just keep me posted on who you're fucking"...not heard that one before. Oh, and please change the title.
There we go, there's a comment with critique, hope it was of some use. Let me know when you've edited this and I'll have amother look. Good Evening to you all.
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on I cannot take this shit(please comment and critique) by TrulyUnique0642
9 Mar 2003, 12:38 PM
What!?
This is wonderful...just wonderful. 9
What is your problem man? You haven't gotten laid lately? Go insult someone else. I am here for poetry not for petty insults.
Also; i've seen a woman crush cans with a thirty pound boob, so, and say a woman squirted a pilot in the eye with warm breast milk? EVIL MY FRIEND, a pair upon every chest. the shape of it all. pornography is 75% evil breasts, just check your local liquor store magazine rack, "how can breasts be evil?" open your eyes lad, it's the first thing in your mouth upon birth how can they not be. My mother had ten breasts, and i never got a one, not a one motherfucker, i got my uncles penis in the corner of the cave. NO!!!!!!NO!!!!!!!!!NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOO!SOUR MILK, just check the date on the flesh fold man, just check the date.