umm. pardon me Brandon, could you possibly use a stronger metaphor here for the insulting snow? Because...Well...See if my boobs can't be evil and curved then your snow can't passive aggressively insulting. <AND THE CROWD GOES wild. Evil wins again!!!!!!!!!. I woulld like to thank Satan, Jews, and Television, also i wanna give a shout out to all of my aborted fetuses that secretely hate me. word. umm i'd like to thank my manager for putting up with my spontaneous nudity and wall knicking wheel chair activities, and last but not least i would like to thank the plague of the future. the crew of the space shuttle r.i.p. idiotic leaders and the ebola virus, and a Catholic church strewn and soaked in homosexuality and aids. (like that's a big surprise) This, unlike fetuses hating us from heaven, is a fact Brandon, and your future. Thank you folks i'm here all fucking day!

Oh doyle rules.

You're funny, somehow i recognize the writing a bit. Then again my mind is an odd device i recognize everything and nothing. take an 8, because i just can't tell anymore.

The end was not as strong as i imagined, but it started and arced quite well. 7.

when I was a kid i always tried to see how far I could stick the tape in my father's tape measures out before it flopped over. Sometimes I'd get it out 10 or 12 feet, on a good $20 tape measure. Always I'd try to ease it out farther; always it'd flop before the end of the tape. Whenever I fucked up a $20 tape measure, I got a good licking.

Not excatally my type of poetry but it's ok ... i guess

delightful... I love line 7, "twinkly stars arms" I think the last line could have more oomph, because I read bukowski too much and have this last-line thing

im gonna vote it down cos im bitter and twisted and think u put far to much effort into a poem about spoons

Obvious juvenile comment about last line in first verse and 6th line second verse. Superlatives and exclmation marks!!!!11111 oh and some 11111's Are you a gerrrrman? Obvious comment about last line!!!! Yippeee