it would be-HOOVE mr foster to familiarize himself with your oeuvre, as posted on this site (see: plains of africa) as well as the 3rd deinition of the poet's perk: coin * age n. 1. The right or process of making coins. 2. - Metal currency. - A system of metal currency. 3. - A new word or phrase. - The invention of new words.

almost there. still a little young.

not as good as it could be. this format may be too limiting to what you are trying to say.

different.

this really dosn't say anything.

know? you mean "no", i am certain.

hrmmmm... syllables, OK... content - iffy, not very funny, really kind of mediocre.

Dry semen, i feel, works much better then name dropping, or cornholing deities that simply just do not play a role any longer in our well being. God does not talk. No-doz? don't punk out, just take the real thing. your imagery here, though fastly sought out i'm sure through hours of sleepless research. was like eating a mouthful of jelly beans, with meatloaf, and champagne while listening to Gobi desert sound bites on lsd and then sand papering ones elbows. Great job. 7.

"inevitable" leaves me hanging, sir! completion, svp!

how kindergarten like. I bet kids would love this--nice rhythm and simplicity... bad title, though.

I think she looks good for her age. (actuially i like this poem)

Hoving? No entry found for hoving. 4 suggestions found: loving moving roving homing shoving? you've masked the meaning too much, i think.

much shorter than the original book. They could've saved a lot of paper.

I didn't read it--but it is not a haiku.

4 7 4 I see a pattern here - thematically and form wise. I'm also curious as to how so many of yours keep coming up--it would explain how your numbers got so high.

"a" rather than "his" perhaps?

I'm confused. thank you. confusion can be good sometimes.

something besides "it" please. The pronoun makes the whole poem inprecise and less poetic.