horus8
replying on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8
4 Mar 2003, 12:41 PM
Like wise i'm sure, did you read the comments? They are hilarious. My feet are cold i stink and need a shower. bye.
hangover
here's some tylenol for your hanover
now
stick it up ur ass
:)
Well, predentistry. That pretty much explains it (your lack of poetry) Get your fucking face out of peoples mouths man. There's a world around you. If you want to be a poet, you go to school for it too, understand Durt? Don't come to a fucking poetry site and think you can write us a prescription of extra weak tylenol, and convince us that you have something noble to say. It's really unimpressive, and frankly in poor taste sir, good daye
Ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
bunniesnangels
on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8
4 Mar 2003, 12:19 PM
i think i love you.
oh, if only.
lol. here's your three back Durt in the form of a two. Why? This is neither informative, daring, poetically different in any manner what so ever, but overall, the theme is as common as ice cream on a hot day. You are about as creatively interesting as CNN. Sorry. Now if she drank gasoline while it was on fire you'd be onto something now wouldn't you?
You are an idiot. Please don't comment on my work if you're stupid, okay? Picture this... the bathroom? is so fucking dirty and stinky? it makes you piss outside instead. YOU ARE OBVIOUSLY TEN, and have never been to a real hole in the wall bar. Every mistake in this poem is purposeful. now that said. You know nothing of poetry don't make yourself look like an idiot under my creations please, thankyou i have work to do this morning other then making you go duh.
Just for you i'll stay forever dick head, know why? because i can write better then you all day long one handed left handed no handed any which way every day. That's a fact. You want to challenge that? Throw down your best i'll through down mine. Whoops! i have over two hundred finely crafted poems here take your pick, regardless you will find yourself considerably outmatched. Oh... also I rock harder then you just visit my website and take your medicine like a good little toy rocker, exactly. Reap it. Hurts huh? tsk. Is there none who can fell Grendal? Where is my match? Boring.
there are some spelling errors and grammar mistakes...how does a bathroom make you piss outside...and if it's a 'room' how is it outside...
Don't be rude, it's not necessary.
Maybe you should read a newspaper every once in a while, or the comments under the poem stupid? Thanks! I'm sure he will keep writing being that he is a writer.
thanks ... i will work on this later
lol...thank my ex gf and my bottle of tylenol....sure u can print it out.
Oh my. I love it! Haven't seen anything like that. At first I was like "Well this is stupid" but I totally changed my mind. This poem blows my mind! Mind if I print it out and show it to a few of my friends? Keep writing. You rawk as far as I'm concerned.
Doesn't make much sense... but who am I to judge? Keep writing.
Degrading towards women...focus your poetry away from offending language.
Ok so where is someplace east of here, I miss seeing it at the top of the charts
nicholas--there's unplanted topsoil here, until the last 4 lines. stop telling me. you've fallen off here. use your eyes to write with, your nose, your fingertips and toes.