Mr Pig
replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig
14 Feb 2003, 5:20 AM
Not true Dark, Caducus had no third line in any of his comments so I suggest you find an abacasse because your comment is bunkum.
Guess what? i'm on veil for a 12g coors light comercial in mammoth from the 19th to the 27th yippy.
By the way, "The Beauty Of His Last Night Wasted"
Nothing can follow that. Leave it be.
You are a writer no doubt. Stupid boy, believing you could change even one thing. They will laugh at you, naive and idealistic. This is not so much a man's world, as a cynic's. Good dear boy, speak, and I shall listen. There are many things expressed here which are beyond the comprehension of fools. Pay no attention to the half-wits. Speak your speak. Bang your fists against the keys, I'm listening.
It's Gardener. Some if these are hysterica,l especially the first.
really touching
excellent stuff
The day she had to go
or, the day that she said, "no".
would finish this stronger, perhaps?
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
Clever. The use of food is brilliant. Food symbolism is wondrous.
you seem to have an odd accent. 'Chased' can be 'chaste' or 'chased', however if it's the latter, it is best to indicate this. All things said, I love the term 'Assmuch'. I may change 'razorgrin' to 'assmuch'. maybe.
if you tried to edit it, you failed miserably.(b),that is the most shab-ass grade school attempt at a comeback I've ever read. worse than the rubber/glue thing. The poeme is bad. face it. last, I will continue to rank how I choose, sir.
your 'help' was idiotic. what doesn't make sense about this poeme being slush?
OneFingerAnswer
replying on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer
13 Feb 2003, 8:32 PM
Nothing like a vengeful person hell bent on destroying you for offering help. Let it stand no as known fact that I will ignore you because nothing you are saying is making sense nor do you bother trying to understand anything.
a) Let's see. Can we read? I already said I tried editing it. Thank you anyway. b) Why give you a book of proverbs you don't understand? If I put it in that book you still wouldn't get the point. c) Rank how you want.
Twatface... hmmm... probably not but interesting concept. The way I say it and people around me say it it comes out as 2 syllables (The "ed" comes out as a strong "tugh" sound thus giving another vowel sound.) but if you wish you can make it one. I can see how it would work. How many fingers am I? If fingers are symbolic for years then I'm 21. If I have trouble counting to one than I have some real hardships ahead. (When "Bumblefuck" is used as a name, as in your comment, it gets a capital b.;)) I apologize for trying to offer help. XoXo, Assmuch.
Ass is nice too. I like ass.
Who me??? Or is this yet another poem about your penis??