thepinkbunnyofdoom
on Impossibilities, and Marvel Comical Heroes. by Bachus
1 Feb 2003, 2:51 PM
Ahahahahahahahahahahaha. Wait nope Ahahahahahahahahahahahaha still funny.
Correct. I play that song (all of my songs and other's too) quite a few different ways uplugged, plugged, piano sometimes. What ever the moment calls for. i call it environmental adjustings in progress always. Your feedback is very much appreciated, thank you.
Much better than your other two. -9-
This seems like a longer version of life. Which wouldn't be so bad but It feels like your just saying the same things over and over again. -5- Try making this shorter or life longer.
Uh??? I've read this Over and over again and it just doesn't make much sense to me. -3-
some deleted user
on Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar
1 Feb 2003, 2:12 PM
LOL
thepinkbunnyofdoom
on Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar
1 Feb 2003, 1:20 PM
This is Great. Almost funnier than the T-Shirt.
This is by far your best work!!!
Lovely. Spring rolls as well (I'm shamelessly self-promoting).
Wowee wow! Fun fun fun!
Is it only a third of Americans that believe that?
Nice poem!
yah, but it doesn't bother me
apparently not.
Great poeme, Teen14! I especially like your rhymings of "try" with "die", "friend" with "end", and "black" with... "hat". Keep up the good work! 10!!!!!!!!!
I just wanted to wrap it up. The world has been all lit by fire in homes. There are some distinct charcters in this poem: Hell fire, smoke, and flames.
The hell fire is taking a bad person to hell.
The smoke wants the darkness to go away.
The little embers are just happy and having a fun time.
blurryphotograph
on haiku's i love but i cannot do them well enough by UAFANTHORPEY
1 Feb 2003, 6:21 AM
haha i love you.
No. It wouldn't have the same chilling effect.
It just means he's really happy. You know how little kids are always so happy? Well he's like that but 1000 times more. Also, no has commented on what this poem is about. Did anyone guess yet?
geller is a pervert he is as bent as his spoons.
Reality is insanity it kills your belief in dreams, take a picture spill your wine, drown yourself in alkaline.
that was my thought whilst reading this and dont ask me why.
reactions are interesting when you read certain poems, this is good in my humble opinion however i do fear votes/comments will be split on this -8