-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on No future by Freethinker1602
17 Jan 2003, 5:29 AM
What a dull comment. This is nowhere near as bad as most adolescent poetry. It doesn't rhyme "lies" with "eyes", "be" with "me" or "face" with "disgrace". You have become a lifeless parody of yourself.
pimple poem?....
I had written the last 8 lines in anger. The ass I wrote this about never realized that this is how it'd been for a while. I'd wanted no future with him.
Possibly I should say it again?
No.
No.
No.
So you concede defeat?
Your books sound rubbish. If you want to read about the conflict between logic and quantum physics, I recommend Hilary Putnam's article 'The Logic of Quantum Mechanics', which can be found in Volume 1 of his Philosophical Papers; and Michael Dummett's response also titled 'Is Logic Empirical?' which I believe is in 'Truth and Other Enigmas'.
This is magnificent, sir. Many congratulations to you! I will hereby grant you a nine and stop this strangely pretentious speech of mine etc. etc.
I enoyed this, despite not know what a vilanelle was. I will endeavor to find out. Now I just have, it is worth 10 because villanelles are buggeringly difficult to do, and you have done one which surpasses expectations, I imagine.
cleverdevice
replying on Clever Device? This is how you hunt angels with an Ashton Kirchner dude where's my car tattoo and legos by horus8
17 Jan 2003, 2:42 AM
Fair do's.
It's not nice to show the war you're living inside.
The best part is the way each limerick has a title. And the way each one is supposed to be a perversion, but the first one is "midgets". Midgets are a pervsion. hasdhasdjkhasa
and of course we can't leave you with probably one of the best if not thee best concrete poem here on poemranker..good night..thanks for watching..<the witches hut, brought to you by 'underwear' what you need when under the weather, and 'forkie' better then spoonie any day..>
probably one of my specials in times of need...and that concludes our visit with z. tonight..i leave you with t-rex singing debora, that is all.thanks for watching..oh debora..always dressed like a conjurer! 10. good night!
ahhh.shit.i'm a dirty bastard?
nahh one time at a bon fire my friend put a can of spray paint in the embers without me knowing...scared the shit out of me...
what scares you?
what's your favourite myth?
sorry about that..had to go play "who wants to be a million heir..would you believe..they shorted me about 900,000.00.. cock suckers..so if you had three wishes what would they be..?
Looks like some dilrod was peeing on the wall here..well well..he's still here..hey! fucker what gives with the six? hiee yah! <baba kicks it three feet off of the ground square in the nuts>
that's right mother fucker i mean serious shit fucker...unless you got the chops scat lest i whoop on yea a bit....capeesh? 10!
oh yeah...what commercial do you hate
and what's your favourite cereal?
What's your favourite color, number,book,letter, aDDRESS? nah just kidding..i do highly suggest t-rex though..ummm. back to poetry..
yeah..so what's your favourite movie?
ha ha!
i'm drunk sorry Fuck..you liTTLE SHIT BRING A FUCKING MARTINI AHHHHHHHHH! a tiny tender rapscallion fetches it6 quickly..i'm momentarily soothed..
soo z..ahhh where did you get your user name from? a twist on the tv character? if i was larry rivers..i'd lick your but..i'm an aniMALLLL! WELL aCTUALLY a russian witch in the off limit area of siberia
Every responsible adults utter mind fuck..a reason to drink, and heavily.
Z?
what do you do for a living other than write great poetry?
Who are your favourite poets, five please?
Name five of your favorite places on the planet..whether you've been there, or not?
ravissant.
tricherie, that would be me. ;)
Duh. So we need a college educated man to spell it out for the masses? Is that it? Please, what was your purpose in writing this.
Nice sentiment. Bad poem.