Bummer.

Maybe it is because I have never had the pleasure of going to a men's bathing pond, but that first image confuses me to no end. Can you explain it?

Is this a haiku or a proverb? Either way it would hurt.

pale rider...bitchin..i heard george thorogood straight thru this.g

on the way out..they throw vulcan a ten..because his poetry rocks too. yeah..chicky chik chik chaw.?

Excellent! ladies and gentle men we have been graced this evening with the pride of wales himself...Nicholas Jones..<the crowd of course is completely asleep at this point or in a stupor..not even knowing half way near to where in the fuck wales is [south west england, i believe, capitol, Cardiff, known for steel, coal, welsh cakes..dylanthomas, {still no one moves fat chick farts again and this time giggles} protestants? COME ON PEOPLE! the land of the poets and singers taliesin? Dafydd ap fucking Gwilym the EISTEDDFODD! FOR FUCKS SAKE..three people get up and leave..ah fUCK YOU TOO, SCREAMS BACHUS..come on nick i'll by you a drink, by the way nice poem dude ..do you go to the college of medicine? or saint david? Bachus and nick walk off into the iced over night to find the nearest pub, and a reason to sing anew..

Are you talking about Ed Gein? anyway... You need serious help this poem isn't worth the time and effort you spent to think up.... an moral impression of wasted space

Distasteful, yet very interesting. I like how you constantly manage to narrowly escape infection until the end. And the pickle part, too.

Pimple poem, super sized!

i don't know about you cats, but selling swine, and cocking back steel, gets it for me every fucking time..YEE HAW! 8 a swell read.

wasn't that special. you're classic seven..why ? because you're luckier than us you bastard. a fine balanced poem.

obviously a brilliant poet dumbing down with hard tweaks and over used symbols..this piece was funny, serious and ended fucking out there baby! a great read.

Pointless gibberish.

So far this is the winner, don't ask me why, but it's loose and accurate to be sure..not to mention..simple and well written in a complicated fashion...i liked it alot. 10!!

Gross.

yes we do care! no. we can't do a fucking thing about it..let me no when you got the perp in a line up..i'll come hold your hand..see no kids, you can't give a poet like thoughtful soul a bad score cuz they meant well, so you have to do the 6 thing..you know what i mean?

yes even occassionally poemranker has station identifications from the emergengy broadcast system..sorry about that. and no. he's not the sheriff, or smokey the bear.he was the airconditioning guy out of freon and drunk, we had to let him go. 0.

She pops up regularly.like those over played pop songs that she hijacked these words from, could be original, could be pilfered..who knows, who dares? 5 for staying alive ah ah ah ah. and the bee gees (which stands for brothers gibb, by the way}k

Now here we have an interesting young poet with quite the growing body of great work. different, brave..willing to take chances, yet carrying a sweet and well educated grasp of the english language. an a real fine user name..one of poemrankers emerging young poeties of the future <New Life Drug> [like three crickets chirp, and some drunk chick farts in the back row] nevermind them kid horus says to new life..they're kinda slow. 8!

Here we have some uknown newbie (realy an oldbe masking) making us that much more stupid than any of us realy deserve to be..PoeT MsAter was it? why don't you die home skillet? 0. that's not a request either.