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on After Halloween by Limness
16 Jan 2003, 9:30 PM
Reminds me of Frost
Why do you write?
Pathetic
here once again we have mutant x doing everything but mutating. do not attempt to read this shite at home children..it may cause temporary drooling and tart walking.
Wow, What are you?
Here we have athena..and to think she graduated from northwestern with a degree in graphic design, and a minor in creative writing..Not to creative though kiddo, hence the wanker award (which is veiwed as an accomplishment to the disturbed) so you young poets take this as a lesson..don't wank with other peoples material, because it might wank you back! [therefore she get the motionless 5{even worse than the zero}. next/
i like he idea, but remember "Pride before fall"
Point well made, only You don't have a clue of what you are talking about
<yes ladies and gentlemen it's time for that all around infectious bastard once again horus8 [crowd pelts him with joints and g-strings he motions his hands for a hushing effect] good evening poets and frauds it's time for 'random encounters' the only show on poem ranker that allows us to dig into the amateur files, to remember the poets we've lost, and to find the poets we'll need to remember..that undiscovered poet could be you> here we see mutant x taking a wild stab at teenage love and the inevitable bitter seperation of highschool sweethearts, and 'wrist slashing' let's just be friends. 6.
needs more
punk rock
Couple typos here and there.
Odd way of sounding (the poem out).
Structure's sort of wobbly still.
Did you choose the simplicity of your words purposely?
Because it takes away from the sentiment i believe.
Therefore, you might option to re- edit this piece with a bigger dictionary if you catch my meaning.
overall though, not bad
I can relate to the situation.
And hopefully your honesty
That is unless it was all bullshit, but i doubt that..have a 6.
this is totally bitchin bros, fuckin aye.<the warlock blast through a set of blistering songs on stage> tommy chong looks over at us above his left shoulder, or ws it right? any way...no matter because he says "you just ate thee most acid that i've ever seen anyone eat, man..uhhuhuh ha"..i like theee vilanelles. thanks.
Got me! I don't have a clue.... Perhaps my favorite book on
quantum mechanics is by an experimental physicist, Leon
Lederman. The title is "The God Particle"and the guy really knows his physics. It is quite long and very funny in parts.
You have surely read Hawking and his, "Black Holes and Baby Universes", is excellent. Also, "Stephen Hawking's Universe", a
fairly small book, is outstanding. There are many others but the above are my favorites. If you like far out type books, try either Capra, "The Tao of Physics" or Zukhov, "The Dancing Wu Li Masters."
I'm partial to poppies and soldiers, and revolution. Not just because i have the band morphine blaring 11 currently either. nice quick verse here. cut and dry. have a 9.
truly hilarious. Your wit is as honed as ever, both your reply to this idiots comment and your mastery of the limerick. bravo. 10!
Note to nentwined: QUESTIONS MARKS ARE STILL APPEARING AT RANDOM.
P.S. This doesn't rhyme very well.
ACE TO THE MAX