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on Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus
16 Jan 2003, 9:16 AM
Nice to see an intelligent american who speaks without apology for his beliefs, Bush thought yugoslavia was a car skoda made, its only one mans opinion, and one mans opinion is what democracy is about. Its always difficult to vote on these pieces but Bachus carry on taking no prisoners theres too much bullshit in this world this is escapism like it or bike it. ###8
'blown' leaves the door open for more verse.
needs to be 'has blown' or 'blew'' methinks.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on On Wanting to Know The Truth by dougsoderstrom
16 Jan 2003, 8:44 AM
Goodness me! It's not like you to get so cross, Doug. Are the inherent contradictions of being a Christian Humanist finally getting to you :) asl?
Alah --> Allah
druel --> drool
Islam and THESE PARTICULAR fucked up maniacs have a very intimate connection. This is a fact.
Very few Muslims are terrorists. But these Muslim's WERE terrorists, were psychotic, were, for want of a better word, evil. And there's much more where they came from.
Some may object to the fact that these men are labelled as ISLAMIC terrorists, but that is how they wanted the world to see them. That there are millions of peaceful Muslims around the world with no connection to terrorism is also a fact.
But unless these peaceful Muslims do something about the fundamentalist jihad on the West, they are mostly irrelevant to this topic.
Mini-Rant Over.
Get rid of 'at least I know...' Get rid of the midget, he got you going but doesn't fit in with this educated crowd of words. the poem starts at stanza 3-'Out by...' the last 3 lines are really wonderful. You need to concentrate between 'updraft...I had to take the train' .
amen.
I very much enjoyed the title and the first four lines. I did not enjoy the rest.
Well, yeah, I'm a genius, but I must admit one or two lines were orphans from old poems that needed a new home.
Beg pardon, I meant your poetry. Stupid keyboard.
Ah, ya bastard. You sit down, braindead and write very fast and this comes out. I've spent fucking weeks on a poem and it's still bollocks. Grr.
10. Much respect for you poetry.
Good.
Well it looks like you deserved this one!
Last line cracked me up. 8
Don't mean to sound bullish or anything-it's just that the old 'dance of death' etc doesn't fit in with this.
Take out line three and I will give this an 8-it's nice.
white rapper?
Hello Professor Doug - this isn't really a haiku, but who cares? There should be more religious verse on poemranker. Maybe I will try to write some.
I met an old guy in France who was a soldier many years before. He spoke better English than most Englishmen.
Argh, do I laugh hysterically and vote you a ten or do I think "racist American" and vote zero? I dunno, I think I'll go for "Do bugger all". Yes, that works.