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replying on not even soup by <~>
16 Jan 2003, 7:17 AM
sounds delicious. today, i have some leftovers--stuffed cabbage, and veggies. i am looking forward to them very much. sometimes, food, sunshine, a glass of water, even--these are everything.
Thank You
Razorgrin,
Why not respond in a manner that is constructive and makes some kind of sense?
Horus,
Why not make comments that are relevant rather than ones that tend to make no sense at all.
Very nice indeed, especially the last line; physical bodily processes have their effect on psychology - President Nasser nationalised the Suez Canal because he had toothache, or something. I like soup, especially tomato, but I a bagel for lunch today, which I filled with brie and put in a hot oven for fifteen minutes, and ate with cranberry sauce.
It's the kind that people who are more intelligent tend to appreciate.
Actually, I really don't like Radiohead. Everybody went on about how experimental Kid A was, but they nicked it all from Squarepusher and Add N To (X). Ripping off the avant-garde is not being progressive. Anyway, I'm not sure if your comments are taking the piss or not, but here are some facts: 1) The person in this poem is not me 2) I am a regular churchgoer 3) I am in the 23rd year of my life 4) I talked to my parents on the telephone last night. I think you live in your own tiny little world, but it sounds more fun and less depressing than mine.
I think you have too much time on your hands, but thank you for choosing to spend it with my poems. Cwmystwyth is pronounced something like Come-ust-with, with the emphasis on the ust. It's easy really.
I'm glad you like the poem; it does tend towards the flippant. I do worry that anyone who isn't obsessed with Hancock's Half Hour probably won't get a lot of it. Also, Henry's Cat probably never made it out of Britain, but he was one hell of a mellow, yellow feline.
I like a bit of good, honest, vulgarity. Like those naughty seaside postcards I used to sneakily look at as a child when on holiday in Scarborough.
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replying on Mommy, why does -=DarkAngel=- use 'an' so much? by <{Baba^Yaga}>
16 Jan 2003, 6:00 AM
I think you are being oversensitive about it. pointing out a distraction is a lot different from slamming you.
Here's my point, if you don't keep to the form of a particular type of poem, then classify it as "freeform". The idea behind a poem following a certain style is the fact that the poet recognizes the constraints and used the constraints to free their creative process. Maintaining a form continues a tradition---and I'm all for doing your own thing--Don't get me wrong. But you can't call a tent a house just because you want to- to hell with an agreed upon format. Go ahead and do your own thing, expirement with rhyme schemes, etc., but doing so slips your poem into a different category. that is my point. your poems have ceased to be limericks as soon as they deviated from the traditional format. I do believe that you are capable of writing a limerick that meets the definition of one. These, however, are misclassified.
So we kicked the shit out of him and hit him hard in the head with our bong, man. Then the police came and said the dude was dead.
Utterly pointless and completely insulting;but i suppose that was what you intended anyway.people kill people, not religion, its simply our interpretation that makes all the difference
Heh, keep up the good work
If it was a proper poem I might actually consider voting... but in the same vein as our good friend Nicholas Jones, it seems you don't recognise that you won't be able to gather support for your abolitionist cause unless you put some effort into it.try harder.
Wtf?
What dark days we live in...10
Ewww, you dirty bastard! Bad doggy, bad!
Mutant X - is that the comic or the TV show?