Ranger
on Morning on Galapados by Mikius
15 Jan 2003, 7:27 AM
Well with the addition comes the need to turn this into a metaphor for two lovers...go to it.
This will be the wall paper for my bedroom i have printed 1157 copies and my room looks fantastic.
The last line was ideal for the pipe gap under the radiators. I would guess bobjim is a casanova in bed if he is this patient at hand typing he has a lot to offer women everywhere, so i am giving you the Don Juan Da Marco award for home improvements and bedroom skills, genius, can't wait to see the sequel will it be called 'off'
Thank you. I've realised that fewer poems with more effort is a worthwhile endeavor. This piece however seems to have flopped.
win some lose some. Could I get some thoughts on "eskimo", please.
Didn't like it. I thought it was vulgar (vulgar adj. from the Latin vulgaris meaning of, or pertaining to, the masses; common)
Nice one!
This shit still here?
Ha ha ha! Sarky twat! Oh, the humour, the humour, the mirth etc!
Probably your best poeme. Congratulations!
You could be Dr. Seuss-in-a-box! Liked the first stanza!
Are you a dualist?
Good work. Yet more references to butterflies.
Like a Siamese twin. I'll give you an eight for this, mainly because I like it.
Ye-es. Not sure what to make of this...maybe another read will do it justice.
Funnily enough...
No problemo, senor
Yes yes, but who's it based on (okay, now I'm really taking the piss!)