Dostoyevsky
on Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar
13 Jan 2003, 2:21 PM
ok this one does deserve a 10, i like it but i dont know why!
Weak.
I agree. Good idea but the poem's not quite right.
very deep and oddly like lessons, kinda mad, but good thoguh until is still my favourite ill give you 7
i like it cause its different, its really interesting though, the way that it has the random nature, i like that about it, a bit too conceptual for me
I guess I have no sense of humor cause I didn't find these forced rhymes and middle school jokes combined in a mess of bad poetry funny. Oh well. By the way if you're going to say fuck then just say it.
I like the last bit best i dont really realte to this poem though im afraid.
i'd lose the last line completely.
I would too....Hye look I'd kind of like to explain and apologize for sunday morning...
euphonious
What? and leave all of these fine suitors behind?
feelin' noxius meself
i'm sure you are talking about dahlia, because they come in rally cool purply colors. zinnias don't smell, and are usually red, orange, yellow, or pink. usually. so, if they had a disceranble-to-humans smell, it probably would be reddish.
now lilacs and buddleia, those are some purple-smeeling flowers. thanks for the compliment.
why the re-post?
check: http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
is this about partial birth abortion
? well? IS IT!!!!!!???
not gettin' one. so there.
general inconsistent tone.
p&k, though you are still you, that was cool. Angelhater, you are a silly churl, a weak blob of shoescraped muck. -=Dark_Angel=- is older and mightier than even Yog-Sothoth and cannot be vanquished even with a +4 Keen Vorpal Shocking Burst Bastard Sword of Wounding. I tried it once when we all went clubbing just to check, but it didn't work. Zzinnia was there, she can aatest to that.
what the shit?