cockfoster.

I like the first half a lot.

they won't grow. they're made of paint, you silly goose! (just kidding) a valliant attempt! an 8.

nicely done. solid 9.

sounds troubled--like a therapy poem. I hope you are feeling better, but you should keep therapy poems to yourself--too often thet sound exactly like this and come across as trite.

certainly unique.

chilly. very nicely done!

decnt poem, could possibly use more concise images.

Consider it a clash of styles, but it seems like you've used a lot of words to say very little.

sent to bed with no dinner, eh? staring out the window? this speaks to me that way. nicely done!

intersting commentary. I like how it feels like a game of pick-up sticks--powerful words thrown together--touching each other with a mix of order and chaos.

I am terminally confused. What exactly does it mean to hae "pulled"? It seems like it may be something sinister and remarkably Andrew Dice Clay oriented. I cannot give this a high score.

Above the waist she's pretty, but she's got too much junk in her trunk. I think the main thing is the editing. I've read some very good things but they're drowning in butter, and I can't appreaciate the subtlities. Perhaps it is just a matter of taste.

funny.

you know, this is a keen observation. you definitely waste your skill when you spew that other crap. why not work on refining your vision? you know the egyptians wore them like jewels, right?

You rule, dude. 0

Ten, yes.

Wow.

Yes please. You see unbeknownst to you it was actually a threesome!!!!