debased
on corners by rockinindividual
4 Jan 2003, 8:19 PM
love it 10
HA ha - you are my funniest friend.HM - poems that god said are good make the firmament softer...
Ornella, unfortunately - you are an idiot. That is the last compliment I will give you. Feel free to send what you need to send back to me to feel better. I can take it. I probably wont read it. Actually, I will print a copy of it and hang it on my bathroom wall. You must realize the world your in. In my highschool, the whole drama dept was running about squidaling the sqidalies. Do you think we have grown older or younger since then. Your not in Kansas anymore, Dorothy. Why not run on down to Leto's hous; maybe he'll let you hold his cum if you pay him enough to look in the same direction. If not I have a few pennies and I will also wish you luck in NC community theatre...or the church choir if the audition doesn't work out... licks - and good luck in your race for the Salibury Conservative pie bake. Say hi to tipper Gore for me. By the way, Navarro's not gay, he's a bisexual that perfers guys.
we'll all be dead sooner, if i have my way, jimmy-ma-bob. no human is innocent. wwww.churchofeuthanasia.com.
why am i not mentioned? grr...8 cause i like cake.
okay dudette, want me to quote the parts i like? i'll quote the whollllllllle poem...
looky looky! she's MY friend! MY genius friend!
I'll give it a ten....a bit impartial...but even if i hated you i'd give you a nine.
what does a postcard consist of? baby arms or dildos?
i second that notion and raise you a trained jack ass.??
Absolutely. That's why I had "a moment" in my first comment. But I think there should still be some sort of context, even in poems that are "snapshots" and "feelings". Your resolve about what? Why'd you fail the first time? See what I mean? It could be done subtly. I'm just sayin'.
a true cross section, very original.
i gave you the blue vote a second ago.s
i just noticed your name was chris, so i believe your argument is accurate. cheers.s
not really because of your use of the word "She" unless she is you, then i totally understand what your saying. Either way, go with what you feel works for you. you're welcome. cheers. thanks again.s
thank you, i admire you for saying that. There are invisible lines that can and can't be crossed.It's important to recognize them and fight for what you believe in, even if some people's perspectives witnessing it feel you're being hypocrite with your actions or needs. In your mind there is a bell that goes ohh always, right, wrong, good, bad. Don't worry about who's right or wrong (i'm right what she did, was columbine trust me) let me worry about that..and learn a lesson from this, some people will love you to death.e
Should be I shall be distrusted. It's a shapshot, a moment in time. Why should there be a message or a story? It can just be a feeling.
lol, you must understand. Walking around New Orleans all day, coming home, crashing, and waking up at 3 a.m. to write his. No revision, no nothing. So pretty much you see it as how i wrote it. I will be sure to revise it and repost.
Dude don't listen to assholes on here that don't know a damn thing about good poetry. I feel that if you feel good about what you wrote, it is good work. I honestly don't know why people put zero's for this. Hell, i could write up something on the life of a fucking mayfly and it would get better than that. Keep up the good work, check out some of my older and newer works.
"69" is the best bit.
And a paper cut on your fist full of aids, and disco balls for i balls. wearing of course magnum pi shorts with a lap snorkel.
yup
Whats lub?