Bachus
replying on My Son is...a prayer. by horus8
4 Jan 2003, 2:02 PM
enough, is usually the last words off of the fools lips when they look up from the ground with my foot on there throat, and
see that my eyes are actually shovels and shotguns. horus has a phobia of tropical islands...he's a desert and beach sole, but me, i like long walks and sunsets, and roller blading in g-strings hand in hand. knots are better severed or shoe laced..care for a pez.
lub u 2
I mean, unless you're like me, you have to really think about your poems. The freshness and spontegayity of my work comes with lots experience and hard work.
just keep working on it
Sorry to ruin everybody's fun, But, AMERICA IS RESPONSIBLE FOR MOST OF THE FUCKUPS IN THE WORLD. THE TERRORISTS HATE YOU FOR A GOOD REASON. YOU DUMB FUCKS, NOT ONE AMERICAN IS INNOCENT, NO-ONE IS. YOU ARE JUDGED GUILTY, THE PENALTY IS DEATH. WITHIN 100 YEARS, EVERYONE WILL BE DEAD. FUCKERS.
She is so going to kick your ass.
How so??? GOTCHA. 10.
It's not as bad as I first thot. 10.
You're one of the few people who appreciate my genius / generous soul. 10.
OKay, the joke was that you asked me to stop anonymously voting zeroes. So I came and voted zeroes but not anonymously. GET IT?? 10.
That hurt. Why must you make it personal?? Here have a 10
Have a ten duewD!
Ah well, want, fancy, love, you know, they're all the same yet so different it's hard to define them. Never mind.
And yes, he has many, many complex issues!
enough of the old trying to numb it up, how about a tropical island as in you and me and some blow who knows.....
yes of course!
lunar
replying on On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit
4 Jan 2003, 10:51 AM
This is good i think, makes you seem a lot more human in a way. How old is your daughter?
Funny.
Very funny. Stanza 4 (especially the last line) is excellent. 9