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replying on Am I Still Here? by Ranger
29 Dec 2002, 7:07 PM
no, not on the casting couch. at least not both of them. she likes to blow him, remember? and he likes her lips. i wonder if she likes BC too?
i don't think i'm a tar heel. i wear shoes in the winter, but one time, when i was at band camp, uh, i mean, in the summer, i stepped in tar at the boat yard, and i guess that technically, i was one for a few hours or so, until i scrubbed it off.
what is the final token of which you speak?
i am sure my school had no mascot; only 22 graduated with BFAs. there were no teams or sports, except maybe competetive tequila slamming. i was a champion, for a brief but shining moment. then, well, another time, perhaps...
Oh yes, Bachus did not take his meds today and went nuts gorging on leftovers the sweetie brought home from the big BC.He is off on the casting couch with the Tar Heel. what is a Tar Heel. Are you a Tar Heel? I am not sure what the mascots of my alums even are. I do not think they even had football teams. The Pioneers (where I teach and received the final token) have a hockey team.
well, it made my eyes roll. but i am not a gamer. never have been. and because i don't really exist. except for settle, because, to him, i am a stuck up bitch, and he needs a fantasy like that. go on, tell him how stuck-up i am! make his day!
also, i said 'ahem' because of who you were asking that of.
Did you read this? It made my pinky hurt from laughing so hard!!!!
What?
ahem?
good god that was a most painful read. Inventive? Are you insane?
I figured I had not heard the last from you on this subject, and your poems are on my list of things to do, I swear. I am fully aware of my contradictions, but I do not see the hypocrisy here. The above poem is full of a few weaknesses that I am trying to resolve; I wanted the insight of the person who left the 3. But most likely it was out of anger. Oh well.
actually, the way i use the site is to see what's wrong with my poems. i'm looking for criticism on them, except for from settle, from whom i expect zeros 'cause i won't perform oral sex...any way.
i don't want to speak for any body else, but i am looking to improve my writing--looking for criticism, not praise. and you get plenty of crit from ol' p&k.
poems p&k has praised:
The Thought Of It by Christof, Silenzia della notte by Tintagiles, Rich and the wall by INTRANSIT, this is not love by Bill Z. Bub, satyr by hatters hare, brackish, Missing the In-Between, kindling, Submerged, (mine), and a few of gw's that she deleted....
Ooops, that was a three and not a zero that
you were given. Hell, someone found at least
some redeeming qualities in your poem while
you found absolutely none in mine. Yes....
hypocricy fits quite nicely.
Not me. I'm afraid I might be biased. Hmmm...and
I believe it was you who wondered why I resented
the zero you gave me. Of course, your poem was given
a zero by an anonymous source but still, it is
obvious that you took umbrage just as I did.
Borderline hypocrisy in my opinion.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Excommunication by inch of candle - Jesus wants me for a bum ream. An narrative in so many verses that madam palms readings have been savarlay curtailed by ==Doylum
29 Dec 2002, 4:50 PM
Ahh but I am dead. For, just like the crotch of my stained (but proud) Y-fronts, I have perished. I'm commenting from Heaven with all the other dark angels. That's why I keep reading Bible stories. I'm with Jesu now. Don't weep for me. I'm with Jesu now. I'm with Jesu now... [fade out]
How about: "ends with placenta" ?
Fuck yeah
You wish you were Chaucer? Have you ever read Chaucer? The buggere can't spelle to save his life!!!!!!!11 lol! lmao! rotfl! HYUK HYUK! asl?
You want to see her wipe?
What an amazingly unpretentious comment! Great use of the words 'allusion' and 'pertain'! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!