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on Skin, Bone, Flesh & Blood by scitz
22 Dec 2002, 3:48 PM
"contented" really? what are you now, contenting?
check " of people and places". A plain write no doubt, otherwise
,I'm witcha.
for some odd reason I like the cheezy poem...but then again I love Celtic cheese...ahhhh....if you scratch my back I'll give you an oz.
The "madness" stanza trips some how between wall and door? Close to perfection ,I'd say.
the pain and sorrow of a truck driver...but hey I thought they were plenty of hookers at Exxon...8
i love operas big time, but this is a free verse, not a haiku, but close (not really)..since i liked the topic i'll push you 'over five' and call it six.
splendid and true.
YESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i need to build an amusement park as well
...signed. Some time after never...
Right, right - uni bomber manifesto translated into alian enlightenment or a real book that I've already read in the future... I think it was written well after the middle east peace treaty was signed, some time after never....Anyway, good boy :)
you ever notice people with no sense of humor aren't <funny> it's caused by a recessive gene due to inbreeding and academia injected 'idealations', the style you're mimicking is a 'code' invented to teach the reader using a mode of symbolic regurgitations inspired by a thought than a notion into idea into written word thus spoken 'it' becomes. exists..for a single but 'every day' purpose, being the dot to dotting, the layering,the connecting of filaments, tissue, elements.. to be assembled than named 'the great bringing', so by using ones senses, both mentally and physically <spiritually fueled with curiosities, insatiable> you correspond symbols with the names at a rate uncalculable and secret <the formula that god used to bring things into being> biochemical process that the mind uses to decide. But [since] you choose not decide on anything other than your 'sad' attempt at criticizing against the value of this particular 'style'. ironically by taking the time to write about it at all only strengthens its validity, so thanks for helping me decide on just how i feel about your attempt. <i don't>.
I was rong your text is not juvenile. It intertwines religion and science, and I find flaw in that simply because it breaks tradition. Usuaslly religious text is vague so it can cover universal sins, scientific and otherwise.
Once again a universal theme thwarted by lack of story. How did you stubble upon these revalations? that's what you need to be writing down. How you feel or what philosophy you have developed is only the theme, which because we all share these insights is a very boring read. Give me the account of what happened, I was not there, and so am interested in your experience. I am not interested in you telling me how you feel, but what caused you to feel. What dream? I want to know your dream, not your evaluation of it
boy! you're sharp. there are only two ways parallel tracks can move together, or appart...but wai..what's this? it's 'towards'.
Why is Gaia mentioned? This sounds like a One God cult(your unceasing reference to the "Light"). You need to read some Quaker philosophy. They named their cult Friends of the Light, or simply Friends. Quaker's a nickname given by outsiders. Read some George Fox, it will help. Your text is too juvenile for your subject matter. You need to do more research. Read Isiah, all of it really but start with Chapter 9, Luke and John. Psalms 4, 19, 119 and 130. I'll post a poem called Raven+ which I wrote 7 yrs ago about my experience. It's not a very good poem but it might inspire some train of thought for you. Good luck, sounds like a huge endeavor.
I like the part bout moving together like parallel tracks...really nice idea
thanks for the points but considering they're from a high school brat I guess its not surprising.......lol
First of all nice name......think there was an Italian actress who happened to have that name too....Secondly....I got sick of all the bs in the media these days and consequently I wrote the poem cos mayb if we tried getting along with other ppl it'd b better than all the fighting crap and thirdly i don't give a shit about ur reality cos REALITY SUCKS
But Bachus, "...the 'wassup' brigade," is supposed to tune someone in to the ridiculous nature of those plastic, mindless
twits who assault people with their vapid personalities and
cliched lives. And this, by the way, was not a rave; it was a party I threw about 15yrs ago to celebrate three of my friends
birthdays. They were all turning forty within a few days of one another and so I celebrated with a 'wingding', that turned into a monstrous affair of eclectic personalities and genres.