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Ranger on one word by Blade 19 Dec 2002, 2:55 AM
Simple...he opens his mouth and crap spews everywhere
Caducus on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 19 Dec 2002, 2:34 AM
C'est Parfait
some deleted user on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 19 Dec 2002, 2:27 AM
Hmm, 'tis very good & seems to be said from experience?? I like this also cos my name's in the title!!
Ranger on before I forget by moonUnit 19 Dec 2002, 12:53 AM
Reminds me of 'Before You Were Mine', by Carol Ann Duffy, I think.
Ranger on Sword of All by marvelis 19 Dec 2002, 12:50 AM
Some of this is very good, some is less than... The second to last stanza is good, as is "Fight with all might" Maybe you could put a dragon in there, and some wizards too(!) Don't worry, I'm just off in a Tolkien world...
Bill Z Bub on no cure by New Life Drug 18 Dec 2002, 8:55 PM
"there ain't no cure, there ain't no cure, there ain't no cure for love." -Leonard Cohen
Bill Z Bub replying on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub 18 Dec 2002, 8:52 PM
Besides playing with line breaks and spacing and punctuation, I added the line "dustchoked in the angles, the wailing and the whiteness" and added a "the" to "final flight"
Bill Z Bub on before I forget by moonUnit 18 Dec 2002, 8:47 PM
quite good. quite quite good. I feel all warm and snuggly.
New Life Drug replying on no cure by New Life Drug 18 Dec 2002, 8:37 PM
stupid me. I'll fix that . One stanza too long? I wasn't even finished with it. HAHA
<~> replying on February by BenRice 18 Dec 2002, 7:51 PM
no. march is next, h: march swept clean, up starts grow through melt and mud: daffodils laugh, yellow and green
horus8 on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 18 Dec 2002, 7:33 PM
don't do it man. slowly back away from the universal mind thing.it's a trick. read sidhartha. friction creates. break the tiles make a mosaic. a pleasent poem though still.
<~> on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub 18 Dec 2002, 7:33 PM
what changed?
horus8 on February by BenRice 18 Dec 2002, 7:27 PM
i know iknow, do one called February forever, and make it about(you're never gonna believe, this) cold weather mixed with emotion.
Bachus replying on "turd to yo mutha" daywalker shittalker by Bachus 18 Dec 2002, 7:14 PM
watch the one with wesley were he's paralyzed. it has some cool wheelchair fight sequences i think it's waterdance or water something or other.n
Bill Z Bub on no cure by New Life Drug 18 Dec 2002, 7:05 PM
It went on one stanza too long. And the line "Its a gast of inpossible waves". "inpossible"? thats immcorrect. And what is gast? Otherwise, I love it. (Its very applicable to a current situation I'm in. For that... 99999999999999999999
Bill Z Bub on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 18 Dec 2002, 6:21 PM
Good revision
INTRANSIT on A christmas thought by keatsImnot 18 Dec 2002, 6:10 PM
Nice twist of the knife there!
INTRANSIT replying on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 18 Dec 2002, 5:18 PM
you are correct m'lady. I was looking at the floor when the answer appeared. cool? low on singles again.
<~> replying on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 18 Dec 2002, 5:14 PM
did it say tile mosaic before? i seem to remember in version 1 instantly thinking of a board.
INTRANSIT on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub 18 Dec 2002, 5:12 PM
This kicks ass.