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UnityMitford replying on March by <~> 19 Dec 2002, 7:41 AM
i think cadacus has a hard-on. don't turn your back on him! this is very nice. daffodil is one of those words that flies off the tongue, as though a poem in itself. 10 swastikas!
UnityMitford on untitled#3 by darby pyn 19 Dec 2002, 7:39 AM
the thing that distracts me right off the bat is the apostrophe in "eyes" that should be there. not to mention the "your" that should be "you're." this has a nice flow. i have no idea what it's saying, but i don't really care either because of the way it moves. 8 swastikas!
<~> replying on March by <~> 19 Dec 2002, 6:56 AM
p.s.--zinnias are not fragrant. zzinnia hardly ever wears a scent, preferring to notice rather than be noticed.
<~> replying on March by <~> 19 Dec 2002, 6:49 AM
indeed it is. benrice was writing month poems, and i was inspired.
Caducus on Leap by robs_remains 19 Dec 2002, 6:47 AM
Haunting/quite touching, An inconclusive ghost story 'tim burtonesque' in style
Caducus on March by <~> 19 Dec 2002, 6:44 AM
If only it were spring, you tease us with warmer climes. Is melt and mud the season change, my ever fragrant zzinnia?
<~> replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 19 Dec 2002, 6:36 AM
i think he meant glasses--the geek look--or at least the intelligenzia--and it makes a nice veer from the expected, don't you think?
Caducus on UltraSound by UnityMitford 19 Dec 2002, 5:02 AM
Either did I till puberty. good poeme
Caducus on Fact of the Matter by marvelis 19 Dec 2002, 4:38 AM
Bravo Sir, this is vivid, started strong and ended strong, making a good use of a philosophy without pretentiosness -7-
Caducus on Sword of All by marvelis 19 Dec 2002, 4:35 AM
this is well written, and i to favour power poetry and rhyme (saw your details) i think the sword needs to go back in the scabbard as it needs a little sharpening, what is your point? it seems a little all over the place. -05-
Caducus on Time by marvelis 19 Dec 2002, 4:31 AM
USER INTRANSIT, wrote a line about ripping the guts from a grandfather clock, i cant recall the title but you would like that poem of his (ask him). This was quite intelligently written, and i think a 3 votes a bit negative, maybe do this as a haiku ? think of some choice lines **6**
Caducus on before I forget by moonUnit 19 Dec 2002, 4:28 AM
Original, I love poems that have lines like yours' the hat you made me wear for school -the one that was itchy' its so true to life and representative of childhood memories, this makes me want to eat my mums crap xmas cake just coz i love her ===8=
Caducus on no cure by New Life Drug 19 Dec 2002, 4:25 AM
victims and masters of our own disasters
Caducus on no cure by New Life Drug 19 Dec 2002, 4:24 AM
Quite Moving and a very credible stanza 2-4 ========8 tears---
Caducus on no cure by New Life Drug 19 Dec 2002, 4:24 AM
Quite Moving and a very credible stanza 2-4 ========8 tears---
some deleted user replying on West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones 19 Dec 2002, 3:36 AM
Ho Ho Ho(well it is nearly Christmas)
god'swife on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 19 Dec 2002, 3:30 AM
Lovely. Get rid of the last 2 lines in the first stanza. I love your poem. i posted just for you.
god'swife on no cure by New Life Drug 19 Dec 2002, 3:17 AM
Forget selfess, that's not in question. Will you be selfish? That's what everybody wants to know, especially you.
god'swife on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 19 Dec 2002, 3:12 AM
'Your skeptical chin once brought down religion in morning's first class fomenting rebellion behind bullet-proof glass.'
Caducus on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 19 Dec 2002, 3:04 AM
Like this better, but being part of the whole seems to incomplete the poem maybe say of the whole ..... something (game seems to basic) fuck it anyway its very good I/T